菜鸟会计求职一个多月无回应，求安慰，求高人修改简历

yoyola2009

发了一个多月没有任何反应，也让很多人改过了，但是一直没有回应，很着急。在这里希望有高人帮忙看看。先发cover letter。

Dear Madam

Re: Accounting Clerk

My name is XXX and wishes to express my interest in the position Accounting Clerk advertised in www.seek.com.au on Monday, June 4, 2012.

I graduated from UTS in 2009 with a Bachelor degree majoring in Accounting. This professional study has aided my confidence to grow in providing accounting service for local companies. I am familiar with MYOB accounting system and Handisoft system, as well as spreadsheets (MS Excel).

I currently hold the position of Assistant Accountant at xxx (a public accounting service and tax agent). This job brings more confidence and experience to me in accounting field in a business context.

As a tax agent my responsibilities include liaising with clients, providing book keeping service including A/P, A/R, bank reconcile, HP, payroll for clients, preparing GST return for individuals, companies, trust, partnership and SMSF, preparing the BAS and IAS and preparing Financial reports for companies, trust, partnership and SMSF. To achieve these tasks, it requires me to have strong attention to details, excellent time management skill, and ability to work well in a team environment as well as adequate computer skills and accounting knowledge.

Although English is my second language, I can easily converse both in English and Mandarin. I am an easy-going person with a good telephone manner and a fast learner.

After reading the requirements for this position, I believe I am qualified and suited for the position in your company. Thank you for considering my application and if you have any further inquiries, please do not hesitate to contact myself on XXX or xxx@gmail.com. I look forward to meeting you in the future.

[ 本帖最后由 yoyola2009 于 2012-6-6 01:28 编辑 ]

yoyola2009

Mobile: XXX
E-mail: XXX@gmail.com
Visa Status: Permanent Resident


Career Objective
To obtain a challenging accounting position in an accounting field that will permit to utilise my accountant working skills and educational experience to become a valued team member of an organisation.

Education

2005 – 2009 Bachelor of Business (Accounting)
University of Technology Sydney

2004 Diploma of Business Study
Insearch University of Technology, Sydney

Work Experience

March 2010 – Current
Accounting Assistant
XXX (a public accounting service and tax agent)


Key Responsibilities

•        Provide bookkeeping service including A/P, A/R, bank reconcile, HP, payroll for clients
•        Prepare GST return for individuals, companies, trust, partnership and SMSF
•        Prepare BAS and IAS in quarterly base
•        Prepared Financial reports for companies, trust, partnership and SMSF
•        Liaise with clients

Key Duties

Provide bookkeeping service including A/P, A/R, bank reconcile, HP, payroll for clients
•        Bank statement reconciliation
•        Business expenses allocating
•        Fix assets acquisition and deprecation
•        Payroll and superannuation
Prepare GST return for individuals, companies, trust, partnership and SMSF
•        Consider the exact amount of GST involved in sales and expense
•        Calculating the quarterly tax liability to ATO (GST + PAYG withholding tax + Income Tax instalment)

Prepare BAS and IAS in quarterly base
•        Finding out how client’s business being operated
•        Identifying which activities being related to the business and happening in the certain period

Prepared Financial reports for companies, trust, partnership and SMSF
•        Analysing client business performance by using ratios
•        Providing professional accounting opinions


Liaise with clients
•        Reminding clients to prepare accounts records, invoices and bank statements
•        Enquiring for doubtful amounts appearing in the bank statements
•        Scheduling appointments with clients

Skills and Personal Attributes
Ability to Work Well in a Team Environment
Can effectively communicate within a team and achieve team goals and objectives

Excellent Time Management Skills
Well organised, prioritising tasks, meet deadlines and managing day-to-day tasks to keep up-to-date.

Computer and Accounting Skills
•        Familiar with Microsoft Office (Word, Outlook and Excel)
•        Currently using Handisoft and MYOB system
•        Have experience in bank reconciliations

Strong Willingness to Learn and Fast Learner
Fast learner and can adapt to the company’s structure

Language Skills
An easy-going person and can speak fluent English and Mandarin


Referee

JG_accounting

同学，简历就叫CV.

yoyola2009

求安慰~~~~~~~~~~

yoyola2009

厄厄厄，想说cover letter来着

ycnang

Although English is my second language, I can easily converse both in English and Mandarin.
住句话最好换成别的吧，比如说outstanding communication, both verbal and written

yicao0219

我觉得把语言那块去掉，除非招聘广告上要求会说中文

acaicai

cover letter 除了开头结尾最好也改成 dot point，没有人会愿意一段一段的读的。

•        Provide bookkeeping service including A/P, A/R, bank reconcile, HP, payroll for clients
•        Prepare GST return for individuals, companies, trust, partnership and SMSF
•        Prepare BAS and IAS in quarterly base
•        Prepared Financial reports for companies, trust, partnership and SMSF
•        Liaise with clients

yoyola2009

恩恩，谢谢各位的建议~

[ 本帖最后由 yoyola2009 于 2012-6-6 02:02 编辑 ]

快乐每一天

My name is XXX and wishes to express my interest

第一句就明显错误，没人会接着往下看：
My name is ...and I would like to express...
申请人是你不是你的名字。

[ 本帖最后由 快乐每一天 于 2012-6-6 12:09 编辑 ]

claire1986

Lz 最好就不要些cover letter，写不好还是反效果。
我最开始也是写，后来就统统不写了，他要求了我也不写，不过一样能拿到面试机会的

tvc889

I am writing to apply for the position of Accounting Clerk advertised in www.seek.com.au (ref. No. xxxxxxx) on Monday, June 4, 2012.

With an accounting degree and more than one and half years wokring experience from an accounting service and tax agent firm, I believe I am the right candidate for this position.

As a tax agent my responsibilities include liaising with clients, providing book keeping service including A/P, A/R, bank reconcile, HP, payroll for clients, preparing GST return for individuals, companies, trust, partnership and SMSF, preparing the BAS and IAS and preparing Financial reports for companies, trust, partnership and SMSF. To achieve these tasks, it requires me to have strong attention to details, excellent time management skill, and ability to work well in a team environment as well as adequate computer skills and accounting knowledge.

One of the main achievements is to xxxxxxx.

I am biligual in English and Mandarin. That gives me advantage when dealing with clients from differenet language background.

I am looking forward to meeting you at the interview stage. I can be reached at XXX or xxx@gmail.com.

原帖由 yoyola2009 于 2012-6-5 22:57 发表
发了一个多月没有任何反应，也让很多人改过了，但是一直没有回应，很着急。在这里希望有高人帮忙看看。先发cover letter。

Dear Madam

Re: Accounting Clerk

My name is XXX and wishes to express my interest in th ...

hyundai

你都全会做了，然后现在apply accounts clerk?
这里感觉有点不对
按照你的简历，下一步该.............你都已经做了aa，不要往回走。

Kennygu888

Never do cover letter when I apply for the jobs

graw

马克

yoyola2009

lovemylife

原帖由 yoyola2009 于 2012-6-5 22:57 发表
发了一个多月没有任何反应，也让很多人改过了，但是一直没有回应，很着急。在这里希望有高人帮忙看看。先发cover letter。

Dear Madam

Re: Accounting Clerk

My name is XXX and wishes to express my interest in th ...

俺不是做会计的。。。不过俺今天上了writing class, 帮lz改一下cover letter。。。见笑了。。。


To whom it may concern,

I hope this finds you well. My name is XXX and I am writing to express my interest in the position of Accounting Clerk (reference number: #### on Seek.com.au) since I believe I satisfy all mentioned selection criteria in the job advertisement.

Having been working as Assistant Accountant/tax agent?? for xxx years, I have extensive experience in the taxation sector. In my current position, I am responsible for liaising with clients, providing book keeping service including A/P, A/R, bank reconcile reconsolidation , HP, payroll for clients, preparing GST return for individuals and companies, trust, partnership and SMSF, preparing the BAS and IAS and preparing Financial reports for companies, trust, partnership and SMSF (去seek上找人家广告上的语句，要么都用动词+ing,要么就都是名词，此外逗号太多了，读着累).

Working in a fast-paced environment, I am capable of prioritising multiple takes to meet deadlines and if needed, I am more than happy to assist with my colleagues whenever I can. Meanwhile, I always keep an eye on details in my job which I regard critical to be a qualified Accountant. In terms of computer skills, I am familiar with MYOB accounting system and Handisoft system, as well as spreadsheets (MS Excel).

Last but not least, I have broad knowledge of accounting theories which was obtained from my Bachelor degree study in UTS.  Therefore, I am dedicated to broaden my career horizon and to apply my knowledge and skills to a position in a commercial organisation. (可以根据你申请的工作修改。如果是跨行业，就说是broaden career horizon/ change my career path into a different area…, 如果是同类型，就说take a career challenge and move to a higher level…)

Considering my experience and qualification, I am very confident that my work and education background have enabled me to perform an excellent job in the advertised position. Enclosed in the email, please fine my latest resume. If you have any questions, please don’t hesitate to contact me (email: xxx; mobile: xxx) for a phone conversation or preferably a face-to-face interview.
       
Thanks for your reading and I looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,

[ 本帖最后由 lovemylife 于 2012-6-6 23:31 编辑 ]

lovemylife

原帖由 hyundai 于 2012-6-6 16:31 发表
你都全会做了，然后现在apply accounts clerk?
这里感觉有点不对
按照你的简历，下一步该.............你都已经做了aa，不要往回走。

同有这个疑惑。。。

js19850

学习了

Euggine

我也投了小两个月了～ 还是没有工作啊～ 一起求安慰

yoyola2009

其实我现在还在一家会计事务所做白工，以上这些我是都做过，但有些不是很熟，投AA有点忐忑。

yoyola2009

握手哦，一起努力吧

yoyola2009

哇，太谢谢了~还这么仔细的帮我圈出来，足迹的各位真是让人感动一把。

yoyola2009

谢谢！

yoyola2009

这句话还是local帮我写的哦，看来local语法不好的也一大堆啊

shyeu2

Firstly, uou have to improve the format and context of the resume and cover letter.

Then refine your wording and working experiences.
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Base on your experiences, I am sure u will find a position very soon (If you can do well in the interview)

Good Luck~

yoyola2009

Thanks！  I hope so.

cindyyanjie

heidichen