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samanthafang15

I feel the wrinkles on your face, feel the roughness on your hands, feel the warmth in the way you looked at me, expected from me, and worried about me. i feel the words on the letter you sent me, three lines of words, you conveyed much more than those. i feel the sadness in your voice, feel the tears you withheld, feel a man’s deep regret to a girl he once too young to cherish, too busy to hug, too firm to love…

I feel the inner me, the gradually built-up emotions from all these years without you, i feel the sudden deliverance, i feel you loved me, loving me, and will always be loving me.  i feel i care about you, i miss you, and i love you.

Three days apart from father’s day, all i wanna say is the above.

漫天雾霾

You’re writing is very sophisticated and poetic. Very enjoyable and entertaining to read.

LadyKaka

漫天雾霾 发表于 2019-8-29 20:38
You’re writing is very sophisticated and poetic. Very enjoyable and entertaining to read.

You are writing is very ......?

漫天雾霾

LadyKaka 发表于 2019-8-29 20:20
You are writing is very ......?

I just mean her writing is very good

samanthafang15

漫天雾霾 发表于 2019-8-29 20:26
I just mean her writing is very good

我想Ladykaka的意思是you‘re writing is very...  是一个语法错误。  

samanthafang15

漫天雾霾 发表于 2019-8-29 19:38
You’re writing is very sophisticated and poetic. Very enjoyable and entertaining to read.

Thx.  

漫天雾霾

LadyKaka 发表于 2019-8-29 20:20
You are writing is very ......?

Sophisticated means high-level and complex

LadyKaka

漫天雾霾 发表于 2019-8-29 21:50
Sophisticated means high-level and complex

我说的是你的语法有错误。you are writing is sophisticated.....

What you are writing is sophisticated .....

漫天雾霾

samanthafang15 发表于 2019-8-29 20:48
我想Ladykaka的意思是you‘re writing is very...  是一个语法错误。

哎，真的，我再去看那句子，我是写错了，应该 your 不该 you’re,她问的对的，但我之前答复她的时候，也是心不在焉，以为她在问句子里，我使用那个后面那个字是啥意思，那么我就后来做了解说。。

我之前在看电视，哈哈哈。。真的，你这英文水平很赞！

sangchen

好好笑

漫天雾霾

LadyKaka 发表于 2019-8-29 20:52
我说的是你的语法有错误。you are writing is sophisticated.....

What you are writing is sophisticat ...

哦，对的，我刚再去看了我最早写的句子
那么，在跟楼主的回复里，也意识到了。。
嗯，你说得对的，是我失误了
那么之前，我也没真正注意你在说啥，我在看电视，
谢谢指教，应该我笔误吧

samanthafang15

sangchen 发表于 2019-8-29 20:59
好好笑

对他人少一些嘲笑，多一些善意，这世界会更美好。

漫天雾霾

sangchen 发表于 2019-8-29 20:59
好好笑

笑啥？老实说，你也写不出我这评论嘞。。不是我笑你哦。。

sangchen

samanthafang15 发表于 2019-8-29 21:05
对他人少一些嘲笑，多一些善意，这世界会更美好。

善意要留给懂得自省，收放自如和顾及别人感受的人，给ta这种人会被肆意践踏，ta所有癫狂不知所云不懂收敛的不能称为帖子的帖子是最好的证明。

samanthafang15

sangchen 发表于 2019-8-29 21:10
善意要留给懂得自省，收放自如和顾及别人感受的人，给ta这种人会被肆意践踏，ta所有癫狂不知所云不懂收敛 ...

看上面漫天雾霾的之前的回帖没有哪里癫狂啊。 就事论事好一些吧 。

漫天雾霾

sangchen 发表于 2019-8-29 21:10
善意要留给懂得自省，收放自如和顾及别人感受的人，给ta这种人会被肆意践踏，ta所有癫狂不知所云不懂收敛 ...

对哦，我需要在你这种整天跟在我后面唠叨的老男人谦虚啥？，哎玛，我说了，我绝对看死你这种人，你都写不出我使用的那些词汇捏！更别说，写出这样的评论句子哦。

虞宅与美丽

好久没有见到这么感性的分享了。谢谢楼主。