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[原创作品] 尝试写儿童诗，给家里学中文的小朋友读 [复制链接]

Echo0531

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发表于 2015-2-3 22:26 |显示全部楼层

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lz很有才。。什么时候把你的画放上来看看。。。

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布鞋族

发表于 2015-2-3 22:35 |显示全部楼层

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Echo0531 发表于 2015-2-3 21:26
lz很有才。。什么时候把你的画放上来看看。。。

多谢鼓励。说来惭愧啊，还是学过美术的，绘画的基本功弱的很。现在正在努力练习，等觉得能拿出手了，我也开个帖子给自己展示展示。

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布鞋族

发表于 2015-2-3 22:56 |显示全部楼层

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Play, play, play,
I want to play.
I want to play with my dad.
But my dad let me
Play with my mum.
Play, play, play,
I want to play.
I want to play with my mum.
But my mum let me
Play with my dad.
Play, play, play,
I want to play.
Who can I play with?
Me, me, me,
I can play with myself.

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布鞋族

发表于 2015-2-3 23:06 |显示全部楼层

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Little bear has a big family,
With grandpa bear, grandma bear,
Father bear, mother bear,
Brother bear, sister bear,
And a tiny little baby bear.
Every morning,
Little bear will wake everyone up.
He will say——
Grandpa bear please wake up.
Grandma bear please wake up.
Father bear please wake up.
Mother bear please wake up.
Brother bear please wake up.
Sister bear please wake up.
And the tiny little baby bear,
Please wake up, too.
After everyone wakes up,
Little bear falls asleep——
He is too tired.

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youya

草鞋族

发表于 2015-2-6 17:28 来自手机 |显示全部楼层

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好有文采啊
赞!

maymei

皮靴族

发表于 2015-2-6 17:57 |显示全部楼层

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赞!

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布鞋族

发表于 2015-2-9 18:12 |显示全部楼层

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Snowman, snowman, snowman,
Frozen in the snow.
Snowman, snowman, snowman,
Hopes to be warm.
Snowman, snowman, snowman,
Stepping to the oven.
Snowman, snowman, snowman,
Turns to a puddle of warm water.

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布鞋族

发表于 2015-2-9 18:13 |显示全部楼层

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Bee, bee, bee,
Flying in the garden.
Knee, knee, knee,
Walking in the garden.
Bee, bee, bee,
Looking for a flower.
Knee, knee, knee,
Acting like a flower.
Bee, bee, bee,
Sitting on the knee.
Knee, knee, knee,
Likes to be a flower.

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布鞋族

发表于 2015-2-9 18:14 |显示全部楼层

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Caterpillar, caterpillar,
Why are you hiding under the leaves?
Caterpillar, caterpillar,
Why are you hiding under the flowers?
Caterpillar, caterpillar,
Why are you hiding under the ground.
Caterpillar, caterpillar,
Just dreams to be a butterfly,
Flying over the leaves,
Flying over the flowers,
And flying over the whole garden.

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