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昨天的帖子得了很多珍贵的评价-----特别是几个小哥哥小姐姐的评价，非常有见地----- 还赚了好多分分，开心！以前在足迹读过很多精华帖，比如13年左右Villa版主的女儿Helen的作文，和同期的小作家Sharon Du的作文，学到了很多。去年读了小小白虎妈妈的阅读贴和作文养成贴，当时第一个想法就是“哇！我要早点看到就好了！” 谢谢这么多网友爸妈无私的分享，赠我以玫瑰
叫孩子回家默写考场作文的初衷是她中文不好，说不清考试时到底写了什么。问她只会说，题目是一个机器人....我写了一个机器人，还有一个小女孩....还有一个镜子.....镜子会说话。再问她就急了，说我写给你看吧。看来还是要恶补中文啊
仍然原样照贴，一字未改。内容我觉得有点像我曾经和她一起读过的一本小说，The Giver， 中文译名叫《记忆传授人》。其实我觉得这本书很压抑很黑暗，并不推荐小朋友看。
考试类型： Acer
考试时间：2月的某一天
考试时限：25分钟
最后评分：Top 1%
学生年纪：九岁半
Quivering, I lifted a hand to open the door. The shadow of it hung over my shoulders. As it slid opened, I managed to steady my breath. I’d repeated this about four hundred times before, but despite that I was still afraid. Afraid of the sinister darkness that surrounded me, making me feel that it had engulfed my courage to pure black, shut the door behind my heart. But to think again, I have no heart. I have no feelings. My life does it all for me, living to suit what has been written in my own biography which has come before my life, generations ago.
Reaching for the little tube in my pocket, I sighed. This was just my life, going and getting some thoughts and ideas from humans, expecting them to help us be the leaders of the world. Robots, I mean. We’ve done this for ages and now it is a routine. We don’t even know it was stealing. We thought our ruling would be good for Earth, and we thought capturing the ideas of humans would be ideal for it.
I scanned my surroundings. A girl and a bed-a girl on a bed, her eyes misty. Soft snoring. The room smelled like aroma. I poked the sharp end of the tube into her ears and blew. Warm air washed across my face. When the tube began flashing red I quickly took it back. I peeked inside to see what I had gotten, but in the corner of my eye I saw a shiny and bright mirror.
I trotted towards it. The mirror was dotted with crystals so pure it could illuminate the sunlight. I looked inside it and immediate feelings brushed against my heart, the first time I really had one. Words emerged from the mirror.
“You do not understand this, Robot.” The mirror read. “This is the Mirror of Truth. You have never known this because you have never understood this, that your ancestors and hidden this away from you. I declare this right now that you have done many terrible things in your life, to destroy humans for eternity, to steal themselves and their brain till they shrink, shrink in rank, shrink in imagination. You have stolen their thoughts, though you think it is absolutely normal. It is your life, what you were meant for. But it is wrong.”
“What?” I stammered, not in my usual monotonous voice.
“Sometimes you just don’t know who you are because you didn’t make yourself you.” The mirror seemed to sigh.
“So I am evil?”
“You aren’t really evil. You are just born to be like that though…” The mirror faded away into the darkness, leaving me standing there alone. I racked my brain for what should I do, but something already had overwhelmed me. I stood still and threw the tube into a nearby rubbish bin.
“No,” I whiapered slowly, my fist clenched. “This is not happening.”
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