給校長的一封信

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因爲要給女兒轉校，學校要求寫一封爲何轉校的信，但限於英語水平太差不足於寫出可以打動校長的信，希望有哪位TZ願意幫忙帶筆，不勝感激，分分送上。以下是Reasons for choosing non local placements may include:
這是其中覺得比較合適發揮的3點：safety and supervision of the student before and after school
                      :structure and organisarion of the school
                      :particular educational programs or philosophy
還有一點是該校有Infant’s Choir，而小女很喜歡唱歌，希望可以加入這個合唱團。
如果有TZ願意幫忙的話，將用短信附上詳細資料。

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請問版主可不可以用自己的積分拿100分出來懸賞啊

hymby

你的英语看起来不错啊，自信点就行了，如果真的要帮忙的话，我可以帮你写，不过最好是有中文的草稿。

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非常感謝
那些REASONS是從報名表上抄下的慚愧啊。
本想足跡上人才濟濟，指望能找到槍手，唉 不知是賞分太少還是人緣太差？
關鍵時候還是朋友管用。

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申請人地址：

申請學校地址：

Attn: Ms #####(Principal)

Dear Ms ####,
Our two daughters, ###### and #######, are looking to enroll with
######## Public School for the next year.
######## will be starting Kindergarten while ######### will be moving on to Year 2.
Our reasons for choosing non local placement include the following:
1 . There is supervision for the students from 8:30am in the mornings so we feel
safer for our children when we have to drop them off at school a bit earlier due
to work schedules;
2 . ######### Public School encourages student participation in a wide range of
activities not just academic achievement. We have heard that the school has
an Infant’s Choir for students. ######## loves to sing and we hope that she
will be able to join the Infant’s Choir and be able to develop that talent. In
particular our daughters are a bit shy and we understand the school’s students
have had a lot of success in debating and public speaking. It is our hope that
if our daughters can enroll with the school, they will be able to develop these
skills as well;
3 . We believe that ####### Public School will provide a wider range of
extracurricular activities for our daughters and promote or discover their skills
and talents.
Since attending the Orientation night at the school, our daughters have been very
excited about joining the school. We hope that ######## Public School will be able to
accommodate our daughters.
Should you require any further information or wish to discuss the above, please do not
hesitate to contact us (02) ########.
Yours sincerely,

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謝謝各位有心的TZ，校長看了信說寫得不錯，轉校成功。
之前有與校長聯係過幾次，就因信的問題而不能解決。

树袋熊

没有这要求吧,我们转了好几次学校了, 只有一个学校需要写转校信,  大概就两句话转的理由. 形式而已.