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上精英后是否要补习的问题,我有疑惑.
我儿子在精英中学,不是JR,但也还属于不错的精英.今年八年级,七年级没补习,我甚至于一点也没管过他的学习,年中和年底的学业报告都很差.校长甚至于给我写了信说孩子的学习成绩不好.
今年问儿子要不要好好学,他说要,因为喜欢这间学校,而且交到很要好的朋友,舍不得离开,所以儿子有了动力想好好学.
那么我问他是否想上补习,他说不要上.不上就不上,我说我要再给他一年的时间让他自己搞定.
这一个学期,我只是监督了一下他的数学笔记和作业,儿子曾经抱怨我只看他的数学不看其他科目,我说你娘英文不行只看得懂数学啊.总之并没有给他任何课外的练习题,前段时间数学考试,他居然得了全班第三名,95%的成绩.
历史考得不好,只得了一半多点的分.但我看了他的考卷,与课本基本上无关,给了一篇文章,题目都是关于这篇文章的问题.我不知道补习能提高这种考试的历史成绩吗?平时作业至少占40%的成绩,作业很少,历史这一学期只有两篇作业是给分数,计入总成绩的,儿子的两篇作业都做得很好.
再说英文.这个学期没有考试,但有两篇作业,成绩会计入占总成绩.这学期学科幻文学,其中一篇作业儿子得了14分(满分15分).另一篇作业放假后才交,儿子已经写完了,写得不错我个人认为.下学期有个英语考试,也是写一篇文章.
下面贴出儿子那篇得了14分(满分15分)的作业给大家做个参考.这篇作业的要求是描述从空中看细腻,而且要以科幻文学的写法.
总之,没有送孩子中学后上补习的经历,不知道补习班都补习什么?
Descriptive Writing
The black sleek craft glided effortlessly through the night sky above Sydney. It is majestic, silent and aerodynamic in every way. It glided through the night air like a shark's fin through water and it is almost invisible thanks to the black radar absorbent paint. The plane has two swept wings, a pointed nose which ascends to the cockpit. Just above it is the single engine it has leading to the rear of the plane, where it is flanked by two tail sections. Mounted in each swept wing were 130mm cannon and 11.7mm Gatling gun. On the underside of its wings, it usually carries four atomic missiles but this mission purely does not involve the destruction of several cities. In fact, it was here to take pictures of Sydney before the invasion, so there was an EXHD camera on each wing (EXHD stands for extra high definition). The pilot can also operate an extremely concentrated beam of red laser, capable of destroying almost anything.
The pilot looks out of the plan and sees a city in ruins. There are wrecks everywhere and there are more craters than the moon. The city is littered with dead bodies, twisted, blackened and charred with almost no chance of identification. DNA samples might work, but the amount of radiation in each body has severely mutated the DNA. The atomic bombing has done its work. On every street, there were wrecked houses. Occasionally, some of these houses where still standing, indication that it is a military bunker, and with that many houses wrecked, it wasn't hard to spot the ones still standing up. The houses are more and more destroyed as it leads towards the Harbor Bridge. Once renowned for being one of the most spectacular bridges in the world, it is now a platform with twisted metal lying everywhere, with two piles of dead bodies on either side with an isle of death in between. This was the fighting from a day before, with men with railguns, radiation spitters, chemical grenades and flamethrowers killing each other. The pilot could remember the hell that day. It was all over in minutes. There were people vaporizing each other with railguns, leaving nothing but ashes in their wake. There were people mutating other people with radiation spitters, causing them to develop random problems, such as extra arms, before killing them. There were the flamethrowers, burning people into cinders and last of all there were the chemical grenades. It explodes when detonated and a puff of greenish smoke immediately bursts out, infecting any uncovered skin. Once infected, you start coughing black blood and vomiting and your skin starts to fall out, turning blue as they leave your flesh, then after several painful seconds, you explode with black blood raining down on everyone. All sense of humanity is gone. Now, the pilot could see a new kind of threat emerging. Some of the mutated bodies have started moving and walking. Now the livings are screaming even more as the undead walked towards them, tearing them apart. The pilot hastily took a few pictures and flew away, not before strafing the undead and the living with bullets, saving them from a fate which was more like a nightmare. The ground was riddled with bullet holes, like Swiss cheese. The plan flew away from the city, its mission successful. However, in the pile of dead bodies that he had just strafed, a few hands are moving. The zombie plague is back.
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2012年7月半月谈 小谈《红楼梦》 (2012-7-15) Rainstorm 
楼主:smiletolife
发表于 2010-3-30 13:54
，也去香港呆3小时买6个包包了呢......
