亲爱的PAL, PATRICKZHU，老大卫，单衣纵酒帮忙看一下CV

kaku32

亲爱的蕾蕾，老大卫，单衣纵酒帮忙看一下。真实找到地方了。我是想在澳洲找一份工作，或者其它有发展前景的，不知各位觉得如何？



kaku32

Great Street
Glenroy, VIC 3046
03-9******** （home）
0403******
*****@hotmail.com

OBJECTIVE:         Electrical Design Engineer/Drafter position

EDUCATION:        Master of Project Manage of University of Quebec at Outaous (September 2004 -on going)
              Coursed taken included:
              Basic Accounting            Project Management,
Team work and organization   Basic Commercial mathematics

Bachelor of Electrical Engineering, September 1992-July 1996
********* University,  China
        
        Courses taken included:
        Circuits        Automation
        Power Systems        Power Electronics
        Electrical Machinery        Magnetics
        Analogical and Digital Electronics        Protection Relaying
Telecommunication            Extra High Voltage Seminar        
              Electrical Components of Thermal Power Plant

EXPERIENCE:        Electrical Engineering, July 1996 to May 2002
         Electric Power Design Institute, China
        •        Developed specifications for design products in terms of clients; preference, national electric code and standard, consumers’ investment, selection of materials, new technology, personnel and equipment security, marketing and business conditions.
        •        Modified the design of products according to users’ requirements.
        •        Designed control and protective system of feeder, transformer, all kinds of machinery, such as motors, valve, pump, fan, air conditioner;  distributing system; lighting of industrial and residential buildings; measuring meters; cabling; lightning arresting system; fire prevention system; layout of bus, circuit breaker, switch, potential transformer, current transformer, wiring and so on.
        •        Produced technical drawings, schematic diagrams
        •        Co-ordinated and co-operated with clients and manufacturers for products and installations.
        •        Collected quality feedback information and solved on-site design problems.
              From May 2002 to July 2007, I have lived in either Canada or China for learning, travel, some casual jobs.


Main Project achievements:
1.Yangzonghai Thermal Power Plant with capacity 2*200MW, in commercial operation
Detail design:
A. Secondary and control wiring diagram including control circuit and terminal panel of feeder line of power supply
B. Control and protective system of machines such as electrically operated valve, circulating water pump, feed-water pump, waste cleaning machine, fan, air conditions.
C. Sound and flash signal alarm circuit.
D. Installation diagram of water level indicating devices and interlocked circuit of water pump.
E. Lighting protections of packing machine house, control wiring diagram of packing machine

2. Qujin Thermal Power Plant with capacity: 2*300ME, in commercial operation,
Field engineer, supervised installation, solved problems of design:
A. Improved the lighting system of dry coal shed because of improper installation location of dust and water-proof lamps in roof of dry coal shed.
B. Coordinated with manufacturers to solve the negative result of unsuitable installation of control board in the main control centre.

3. 110KV Zhangguangying Substation, in commercial operation
A. Wiring diagram and terminal panel of 10KV line
B. Measuring meter panel of 10KV line
C. Schematic diagram of section breaker control circuit of 10KV line
D. Terminal panel of operating circuit and switch board of 10KV line

4. Xuanwei Thermal Power Plant with capacity: 2*300MW
  Electrical Design Engineer:
A. Secondary and control wiring including control circuit, interlocked circuit, terminal panel, protective relaying circuit, sound and flash signal alarm system, measuring meters such as kilowatt-hour meter, ampere, voltmeter.
B. Lighting operation box, lighting equipment summary, lighting and wire lying diagram of auxiliary buildings
C. Cable lying, design of cable rack, calculating cable length, specifications of cable

5. Desulphurization Project of Xiaolongtan Thermal Power Plant with capacity: 6*100MW which is a technical renovation project for environmental protection
A. Terminal panel of electric precipitator system including high-voltage and low-voltage control board, electrically heated terminal panel of ash hopper, operated box of ash hopper, electromagnetic vibration box, control desk of main computer)
B. Control circuit of water cooling pump, water pump, fan, ash transfer motors, transformer of air compressor
C. Wiring diagram of current and voltage circuit
D. Terminal panel of 6 KV switch board of transformer and 380Vdistributing panel of air compressor

6. Reconstruction of Workshop in Yangzhonghai Thermal Power Plant
Chief design engineer
A. Low-voltage switch board for machines in workshop
B. lighting system of workshop and office buildings
C. Cable lying of workshop and office buildings.

7. Residential Building of repair factory of Yunnan Thermal Power Construction
A. Lighting system
B. Grounded layout of lightning Arrester of all buildings

8. Added Bay between 110KV Xiaoheishan substation and 110KV Pingyuanjie Substation
A. Layout of outdoors distributing equipment
B. Installation diagram of SF6 circuit breaker, switch, potential transformer and current transformer
C. Wiring diagram of 110KV feeder between Pingyuanjie line and Qiubei line
D. Control circuit of 110KV feeder between Pingyuanjie line and Qiubei line
E. Panel of Control circuit

9. Drainage Closure System Project of Xunjiansi Power Plant
A. Distributing system
B. Cabling

10.Translating technical package of excitation control system of Xuanwei Thermal Power plant (From English to Chinese)
Including specifications, technical documents of diagrams, liaison sheets
R-R Industrial Controls Ltd. provides this package of excitation control system.
Address: Kingsway, Team Valley Trading Estate, Tyne and Wear, England, NE110QJ
TEL: 0191487081

Computer:
•        Advanced knowledge of AUTOCAD.
•        Word, Excel and PowerPoint.
•        Operating system: Windows NT, 2000, XP.

Referenc:
1. Senoir Engineer, Ms Yang **
tel: 86-***-*******

2. Senoior

goldenapple

好多achivements啊。。。。

pal

that impressed me， but you didnt have the qualification to do the design job here， get the rrecognition for the engineer first

夢回唐朝

原帖由 pal 于 2007-8-31 13:05 发表
that impressed me， but you didnt have the qualification to do the design job here， get the rrecognition for the engineer first

lz听不进去的，该说的早就说了，就lz阅历在澳洲做drafting都不容易,别说engineer了，标准的眼高手低

kaku32

I am not sure whether I could have recognition of engineer.

I am involved in the privous experience which it not whole for an engineer. I said I belongs to junior or intermedium engineer. 5 years' gap and old work experience blocked me to get a professional job here right away. I do not quit this endeavorment actually. But it is a barrier for me.

I know some points of this experience are not suitable and strong enough for an engineering job. So I need your suggestions.

kaku32

What do you mean by lz阅历?

According to what I heard, some migrants from China have 2 or 3 years experience which are not rich generally, but they got offer from local company.

I am not sure these junior engineer from China would be qualified for this position based on Chinese qualification or experience.2 or 3 years' engineering experience are totally nothing in China, specially in state-owned firm.

原帖由 夢回唐朝 于 2007-8-31 13:10 发表


lz听不进去的，该说的早就说了，就在澳洲做drafting都不容易,别说engineer了，标准的眼高手低

夢回唐朝

原帖由 kaku32 于 2007-8-31 13:10 发表
I am not sure whether I could have recognition of engineer.

I know some points of this experience are not suitable and strong enough for an engineering job. So I need your suggestions. ...

You don't need to post again and again. Just read all your 求助贴s. No more good suggestions for you. No one can help you except God and yourself.

Garfield

原帖由 kaku32 于 2007-8-31 12:59 发表
亲爱的蕾蕾，老大卫，单衣纵酒帮忙看一下。真实找到地方了。我是想在澳洲找一份工作，或者其它有发展前景的，不知各位觉得如何？

Who is 蕾蕾?

Garfield

原帖由 夢回唐朝 于 2007-8-31 13:17 发表


You don't need to post again and again. Just read all your 求助贴s. No more good suggestions for you. No one can help you except God and yourself.

既然帮不了他，何不水了他？

pal

原帖由 Garfield 于 2007-8-31 13:19 发表

Who is 蕾蕾?

搞懂了，从freeoz直接copy过来的，标题改了我，内容忘记改了

kaku32

If you are cold blooded, you could ignore what I said.

I came here for help.

You could go away as you like a god. I could get some helpful tips no matter what happen negatively or positively.

It is essential for me to get rewarding advice or suggestion from the thirt party. Sometimes I am lost in my career development.

I will go ahead if possible.

原帖由 夢回唐朝 于 2007-8-31 13:17 发表


You don't need to post again and again. Just read all your 求助贴s. No more good suggestions for you. No one can help you except God and yourself.

pal

建议你直接问中介为什么不找你好了，对症下药，估计这两个BBS的人能帮你的也就这些了

夢回唐朝

原帖由 Garfield 于 2007-8-31 13:20 发表

既然帮不了他，何不水了他？

毕竟lz的贴子丰富了一下工作之余的生活

kaku32

I could go like what I like to go.

Garfield

so you don't need any help, just go ahead

大杨树

Your CV has problem, you didn't hightlight your key skills and focus on your strengthen.It's hard to read it. And you'd better foucs on one job,e.g. draft with skills of electrical schematic drawing, power system drawing, ACAD, et. We can discuss more if you like.

夢回唐朝

敢情还是个愣头青，一条道跑道黑

不忍心，再给个建议，把你所有的帖子再好好看一边，把所有建议的部分复制出来整理一下，再好好读读，所有的答案都在里面

夢回唐朝

原帖由 大杨树 于 2007-8-31 13:41 发表
Your CV has problem, you didn't hightlight your key skills and focus on your strengthen.It's hard to read it. And you'd better foucs on one job,e.g. draft with skills of electrical schematic drawin ...

lz perfer someone can do it for him or her.

kaku32

It is of most essence to get your kind response quickly.

Great thanks on you.

I am sure there is big problem with my CV. As what you said, no hightlight is avaible.

My msn is tosydney2007@hotmail.com

Because I am sitting at AMES office, I could not use msn for chatting with you. But in half hour, I will go back home.

Keep in touch.

I greatly appreciate your wonderful advice that is what I badly need.

原帖由 大杨树 于 2007-8-31 13:41 发表
Your CV has problem, you didn't hightlight your key skills and focus on your strengthen.It's hard to read it. And you'd better foucs on one job,e.g. draft with skills of electrical schematic drawin ...

applenet

你的CV先写EDUCATION, 这是大忌, 一般中介都只扫一眼很快,一看到你这种格式的,第一印象就是你没本地经验,你这叫自己HIGHLIGHT自己问题

Tigerpie

我觉得kaku32,有几点建议不一定成熟，仅供参考：

1），你的教育背景你面只需要写什么专业，什么学位，什么学校就可以了，没有必要列出所学的课程，你有不是刚毕业；

2），把特长和工作经历放在最前面；

3），格式修改的更能突出关键内容一些；

4），找个tafe的老师修改一下你的英文用词；

哈哈，随便说说

applenet

楼上的说的很有道理.

fanjin1976

原帖由 applenet 于 2007-10-12 23:33 发表
你的CV先写EDUCATION, 这是大忌, 一般中介都只扫一眼很快,一看到你这种格式的,第一印象就是你没本地经验,你这叫自己HIGHLIGHT自己问题

那依照你的建议，怎样写才能不让中介觉得申请人不是没有本地经验呢？如果方便的话，给个格式吧，呵呵:si56:si120

applenet

楼上有佣金给我吗?