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Ritacow

挑错儿Competition - Weekly 1

- 请在以下文章里挑错儿 + 并且写入正确的
- 然后copy & paste 整篇文章在回复里
- 故事里有10个错
- 每挑对一个 = 我给你加 1 分
- 挑错的 / 没挑出来的 / 觉得正确的也是错的 = 扣 1
- 先声明 -  Varroa or varroa 没有拼错 (大写小写)
- 我加了个图片 (学习英文的同时，大家也增加一下知识吧！）


Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasit mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa investigation has been responsible for over halve of all beehive colonies collapses and have the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, principle research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be, Australia has managed to contain serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

[ 本帖最后由 Ritacow 于 2009-4-19 22:28 编辑 ]

astina

it’s ->its


principle -> princal

bee to be -> bee to bee

astina

for over halve of all beehive colonies , half not halve

Ritacow

原帖由 astina 于 2009-4-15 20:26 发表
it’s ->its


principle -> princal

bee to be -> bee to bee

你得整篇文章一起从新上传。
你要是对了3个 那就是 + 3 分  - 7 分 = -4 分

要不要我给你 减分儿 啊

loushenghong

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack (attacks) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities (deformity) and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills (kill) the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be (bee), Australia has managed to contain serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

先挑选简单的做。mm手下留情，不要扣分啊。参与第一参与第一。

astina

have the potential -> has the potential

astina

原帖由 Ritacow 于 2009-4-15 20:28 发表


你得整篇文章一起从新上传。
你要是对了3个 那就是 + 3 分  - 7 分 = -4 分

要不要我给你 减分儿 啊

K,你没讲清楚，那我弃权吧，别扣分呀

Tiger_Karen

你确认文中有错么？

一个根本挑不出错的文盲  留

Ritacow

原帖由 astina 于 2009-4-15 20:29 发表


K,你没讲清楚，那我弃权吧，别扣分呀

算了， 大家一块儿来吧。
可能如果我那么办可能太苛刻了。

你们能挑几个是几个 吧！

Ritacow

原帖由 Tiger_Karen 于 2009-4-15 20:31 发表
你确认文中有错么？

一个根本挑不出错的文盲  留

我中文肯定有问题
你们大可以挑我的错儿
哈哈

dorothy156

原帖由 Ritacow 于 2009-4-15 20:23 发表
挑错儿Competition - Weekly 1

- 请在以下文章里挑错儿 + 并且写入正确的
- 然后copy & paste 整篇文章在回复里
- 故事里有10个错
- 每挑对一个 = 我给你加 1 分
- 挑错的 / 没挑出来的 / 觉得正确的也是错的 ...

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s（its) greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor(destructive) parasit mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa investigation has been responsible for over halve(half) of all beehive colonies collapses and have(has) the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and (has)totally wipe(wiped） out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, principle(principal) research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack（attacks) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills（kill) the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be(bee), Australia has managed to contain(control) serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

Rita啊，偶已经很认真的完成啦~~请批阅~~错了别扣分分啊

一炷香

我觉得rita发完贴可以弄个高点的权限，过一个小时再让大家回帖，否则像我这样慢动作的人会摒不住看答案的。。。。。

hhuang

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s (ITS) greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasit mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa investigation (INVASION) has been responsible for over halve (HALF) of all beehive colonies (COLONY) collapses and have (HAS) the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation (INFECTION) makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, p(P)rinciple r(R)esearch s(S)cientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack (ATTACKS) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills (KILL) the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be (BEE), Australia has managed to contain serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

Ritacow

原帖由 zmzhu 于 2009-4-15 21:12 发表

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face its greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasite mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overs ...

你能帮我标明那里是改的吗？
看不太见
thanks

Ritacow

吃完饭，我就开始评分了
(paopaobing(47))

秋秋

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s (its)greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor (-) parasit mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa investigation has been responsible for over halve(half) of all beehive colonies collapses and have the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says(said) Dr Denis Anderson, principle (princiapal)research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack(attacks) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be(bee), Australia has managed to contain serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

迷失@森林

我只是路过一下而已

老陶

没人看出来开头就错了吗，不是应该 australian honey industry 吗？

Ronny

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s (its)greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasit (parasite) mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa investigation (infestation) has been responsible for over halve (half) of all beehive colonies (colony) collapses and have (has) the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, principle (prinspal) research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack(s) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be (bee), Australia has managed to contain serious infections (infection), such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

居然觉得不止10个错(paopaobing(15)) 期待答案

迷失@森林

原帖由 老陶 于 2009-4-15 22:07 发表
没人看出来开头就错了吗，不是应该 australian honey industry 吗？

Australia's是没有问题的
我手边这本《Australia's Graduate jobs directory》就证明了这点

老陶

哦，谢啦P14，总觉得这样读很别扭的说。

迷失@森林

因为中国小学英文课本里教的都是Chinese, Australian, 所以可能不习惯China's, Australia's这种说法
到了这边看报纸多了就习惯了

astina

晕，principal居然给拼错了，555555555555

阿Ka

原帖由 astina 于 2009-4-15 22:48 发表
晕，principal居然给拼错了，555555555555

as怎么那么起劲啊，一个专业人士，非要跟我们这些业余爱好者抢饭碗，看来真是一点机会也没有

Ritacow

还没有人都对的呢!

加油儿啊同志们！

bffbffbff

等会我！ 我也来要分来了1

Ronny

晕倒，刚刚发现我把PRINCIPAL给拼错了。
RITA什么时候能够公布答案啊？

Ritacow

才贴没多会儿
再看看有没有人能够多一点儿分儿的
怎么也得贴一天吧 24 hrs

我觉得反应还蛮不错的

bffbffbff

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face

1. it’s -> its

greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor

2.1 - or ,

2.2 parasit -> parasite

mite.

Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.


Overseas, varroa

3. investigation -> infestation

has been responsible for over

4. halve -> half

of all beehive colonies collapses

5. and have  -> has

the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson,

6. principle -> principal

research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite

7. attack -> attacks

both developing larvae and adult bees,

causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately

8. kills  -> kill

the entire hive.

Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to

9. be, -> bee

Australia has managed to

10. contain -> confine

serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus –

a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

bffbffbff

给rita同学提个建议， 能不能给弄点流行点的题目，比如娱乐8卦经济政治焦点事件之类，这样做的也有意思啊，像这个很多词太晦涩了读起来很不爽啊