这句话的PURSUED是什么意思?

likespring

原句:
It is the opportunities to enhance the quality of service and products are indentified and pursued within the company's requirements.
Pursue 在这里什么意思?

likespring

谢谢

likespring

还有这句,翻译不好
Procedural aspects of service delievry are monitored for effectiveness and suitability to customer requirements
我翻译的:
为了客户服务的有效和恰当,在递送服务的程序过程方面是被监控的.

freeau

这个句子语法没问题吗?

likespring

Opportunities to enhance the quality of service and products are indentified and pursued within the organisational requirements.
原句如上.
我因为写作业该成了上面的样子.
那么是不是该成病句了?

谢谢你的回复:)

likespring

改成病句了.
改回来,
Opportunities to enhance the quality of service and products are indentified and pursued within the organisational requirements.

pursue是什么意思还是不明白.

astina

还是感觉语法有问题啊

pursue是追求，努力，探索的意思

老杏

原帖由 likespring 于 2008-3-30 12:42 发表

Procedural aspects of service delievry are monitored for effectiveness and suitability to customer requirements
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提供服务的流程方面在有效性和对客户要求的适应性是受到监控的。

原帖由 likespring 发表
Opportunities to enhance the quality of service and products are indentified and pursued within the organisational requirements.

在公司要求范围内发现并实现增强服务和产品质量的机会。

一楼的句子里it is是多余的结构，如果想强调，请在are前面加that.

[ 本帖最后由 clur 于 2008-3-30 14:45 编辑 ]

likespring

原帖由 astina 于 2008-3-30 14:32 发表
还是感觉语法有问题啊

pursue是追求，努力，探索的意思

检查了,原句是这个样子的.
谢谢阿丝!

likespring

原帖由 clur 于 2008-3-30 14:42 发表


提供服务的流程方面在有效性和对客户要求的适应性是受到监控的。



在公司要求范围内发现并实现增强服务和产品质量的机会。

一楼的句子里it is是多余的结构，如果想强调，请在are前面加that.

明白了,太好啦:)谢谢啊!

jasonliu234

这句话有两种可能性, 1, 要么就是语病 2. 语病没有, 但是不通

1. 一句话里面出现两个谓语, 如果不是从句就是错的

先把主干拿出来
The opportunities are indentified and pursued within the company's requirements.

to enhance the quality of service and products是修饰opportunities, 分解之后就好翻译了. 但是开始的It is 似乎有点多余, 又不是强调句it is.. that.... 感觉.

2. 重新分解句子
It is the opportunities to enhance the quality of service;
and products are indentified and pursued within the company's requirements.
这样语法错误没有, 但是后半句, prodcuts 用pursue 搭配, 意思有点不通.

likespring

我查了,没有抄错呀,这样吧,我把书上原文全抄下来,请大家看看.十分感谢!

Cmpetencies:
In this section you will learn how to monitor and report on service delivery.
Competencies covered include:

Customer satisfaction with service delivery is regularly reviewed using verifiable evidence in accordance with organisational requirements

Opportunities to enhance the quality of service and products are indentified and pursued within organsational requirements

Procedual aspects of service delivery are monitored for effectiveness and suitability to customer requirements

Customer feedback is regularly sought and used to improve the provision of products and services

Decisions to modify products or services incorporate evidence of  customer satisfaction and are within organisational requiements

Reports are clear, detailed and contain recommendations focused on critical aspects of sevices of service delivery.

jasonliu234

这样就是第一种可能性,

lz起初似乎多了it is. 没有it is 这句话就通了.

在公司的规章要求下, 改善服务和产品的质量的机会, 会被鉴别并且实现.

pursue opportunity 有这个词组, 表示努力得到机会.的意思

[ 本帖最后由 jasonliu234 于 2008-3-30 17:56 编辑 ]

likespring

原帖由 jasonliu234 于 2008-3-30 17:20 发表
这样就是第一种可能性,

lz起初似乎多了it is. 没有it is 这句话就通了.

在公司的规章要求下, 改善服务和产品的质量的机会, 会被鉴别并且实现.

pursue opportunity 有这个词组, 表示努力得到机会.的意思

It is 是我自己加的,后来又改回去.