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女儿写的故事- 送给妹妹的礼物 [复制链接]

发表于 2012-4-14 00:16 |显示全部楼层
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女儿写的故事- 送给妹妹的礼物, 是Easter前就写好了的,说要给妹妹一个惊喜,我这个当妈的太懒现在才想起来发.

EASTER 2012
Everyone knows on Easter the Easter bunny comes with Easter eggs, but no one knows how the Easter bunnies formed! But the Easter bunnies have left behind their dairy, and now you will know the big mystery!

A long time ago, when there are still dinosaurs, the bunnies were really poor. They have to hide from dinosaurs, and have nothing to eat. Only the bun loyal king has everything he wants, but he never shared to any other bunnies!

One day a bunny said “It’s time to not live with the stupid loyal bunny king anymore, he don’t share with us, and he’s being really mean to us!  ” Every other bunnies agreed. So they set off when king bunny was asleep.


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发表于 2012-4-14 00:19 |显示全部楼层
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第一次上传图片, 好不容易才成功, 大家能不能给点分分鼓励一下!

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看不清,鼓励一下

发表于 2012-4-14 01:00 |显示全部楼层
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太长了, 明天再发其余部分. 话说我们家姑娘受到我的表扬后, 一口气又写了四本图文并茂的故事书, 每本至少有十页, 家里的打印纸是快速减少...

发表于 2012-4-14 16:42 |显示全部楼层
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没办法, 权限太低了, 大家简单先看一下吧, 如果觉得还有点意思请给小朋友一点鼓励! 十分感谢!

EASTER 2012
Everyone knows on Easter the Easter bunny comes with Easter eggs, but no one knows how the Easter bunnies formed! But the Easter bunnies have left behind their dairy, and now you will know the big mystery!

A long time ago, when there are still dinosaurs, the bunnies were really poor. They have to hide from dinosaurs, and have nothing to eat. Only the bun loyal king has everything he wants, but he never shared to any other bunnies!

One day a bunny said “It’s time to not live with the stupid loyal bunny king anymore, he don’t share with us, and he’s being really mean to us!  ” Every other bunnies agreed. So they set off when king bunny was asleep.

When they were out, a huge dinosaur went running to them. “ROAR!” it shouted, the bunnies quickly run inside a log. A bunny used a stick to draw out their plan to get away the huge dinosaur.

“what can we do now?” asked a bunny, a bunny sighed, “Eaten by an dinosaur?” he asked. Suddenly, a little mice crept into the log. The mice stared with fright, and ran away as fast as he can. A piece of paper dropped from his cloths. “Hey wait!” shouted the bunny drawing the map. But he was already gone.

The bunnies looked at the paper carefully. “Easter eggs?” asked a bunny. The other bunnies nodded their heads. “Hmmm, Ah I know what this means!” said a bunny. “what?” asked the others. “let’s make Easter Egg and we can not worrey about food, and we can sale it to the dinosaurs to find our new home!” the bunnies gave him a smile.

So they started early the next morning. Bringing a lot of chocolate was hard work, but fun too, they start making chocolate while others wrap them with colourful paper. It sure was messy, but who cares anyway? No ones looking, they are so sure!

Back at king bunny’s place, he’s shouting order to the bunnies. But the bunnies are nowhere to be then… “Roar!” went a dinosaur’s voice. King bunny ran inside as quickly as he can, but the dinosaur just roared louder!

At the time the bunnies have already made 10 Easter eggs. Suddenly, aloud “roar!” filled the room, the bunnies grabbed all ten Easter eggs and ran outside. The dinosaur was in king bunny’s house! “I’ve got a great plan to save king bunny! How about giving our ten Easter eggs to the dinosaur?”
So they set off the dinosaur edged closer to king bunny, “ help!”shouted king bunny. The bunny ran over to the dinosaur as it “ roars!” the bunnies handed him the Easter eggs. “ could you swap ten Easter eggs for not harming our friend?” asked the bunnies. The dinosaur runs away quickly.

King bunny hugged all the bunnies. “are we still friends after I done such bad things to you?” asked king bunny. “ of course king bunny, we are best friends!” said the bunnies. King bunny wiped a tear off his face. “I’m really sorry not to share with you and being mean, now please come back and have dinner with me!”

And so king bunny gave them the magic wand, and they get invisible so that's why. But maybe not all of them are invisible! So on your Easter hunt, remember to check if the bunnies are there!

发表于 2012-4-14 18:50 |显示全部楼层
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楼主女儿真不错,写的好,画的也很好。
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发表于 2012-4-14 18:53 |显示全部楼层
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原帖由 墨缘 于 2012-4-13 23:16 发表
女儿写的故事- 送给妹妹的礼物, 是Easter前就写好了的,说要给妹妹一个惊喜,我这个当妈的太懒现在才想起来发.

EASTER 2012
Everyone knows on Easter the Easter bunny comes with Easter eggs, but no one knows h ...


顶一下,故事写得很好啊!分先打白条,等有了再补上。

另外很喜欢你的ID,和我闺女用同一个字。
墨墨爸

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