挑错儿开始 15 04 09 - Competition - Week 1 - 谜底揭晓！

阿Ka

我赌菲菲 50分

Ritacow

有8分的小朋友啦 :)

bffbffbff

哦也~  后来的同学把评过分的作业好好研究下有望攻克难关哈

Ritacow

原帖由 bffbffbff 于 2009-4-15 23:17 发表
给rita同学提个建议， 能不能给弄点流行点的题目，比如娱乐8卦经济政治焦点事件之类，这样做的也有意思啊，像这个很多词太晦涩了读起来很不爽啊

你的提议不错
我们每个星期换着来
如果这个题栏还满受欢迎的，我可以 increase the frequency.

因为，现在的英文文章比较正统。
娱乐新闻比较滥用词句。

看了这篇文章后，你我都有可用的知识增长

Ronny

8. kills - kill
也想过这个，不过读起来的感觉却不是很顺畅，而且我觉得kill的主语是'the varroa mite' 不是'viruses'

请大家议议？

Ritacow

原帖由 Ronny 于 2009-4-15 23:32 发表
8. kills - kill
也想过这个，不过读起来的感觉却不是很顺畅，而且我觉得kill的主语是'the varroa mite' 不是'viruses'

请大家议议？

A virus that ultimately kills the entire hive

Vs

Viruses that ultimately kill the entire hive

bffbffbff

我觉得就说virus的，尤其那个ultimately更强调了根本原因。

Ritacow

还有没有能人儿来挑战超越 8 分的？

来吧来吧

bffbffbff

估计还有一个
。。。of all beehive colonies （COLONY）collapses 。。。
还一个就等答案了～

Ritacow

还有没有人要attempt啊 ？

要是一次全对的话，我给你加 50 分！

alyssa

太深奥了。。。 偶放弃。。。

Artcore

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s (its) greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasit (parasite) mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa (Varroa) investigation has been responsible for over halve (half) of all beehive colonies collapses and have (has) the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe (wipes) out our native feral beehives.

With varroa (Varroa) already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, principle (principal) research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa (Varroa) mite attack (attacks) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills (kill) the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be (bee), Australia has managed to contain serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

derek

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face it’s (its) greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasit (parasite) mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa investigation (infestation ) has been responsible for over halve (half) of all beehive colonies(colony) collapses and have (has) the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, principle (principal) research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The (With the) size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attack (attacks) both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kills (kill) the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to be (bee), Australia has managed to contain (confine) serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

[ 本帖最后由 derek 于 2009-4-19 22:09 编辑 ]

Ritacow

Australia’s honey industry is yet to face its greatest challenge – the anticipated arrival of the Varroa destructor parasitic mite. Australia is one of the last countries free of the mite.

Overseas, varroa infestation has been responsible for over half of all beehive colony collapses and has the potential to destroy Australia’s 500,000 managed hives of European honey bees, and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

With varroa already in New Zealand and Papua New Guinea, it is only a matter of time before an infestation makes it to Australia, says Dr Denis Anderson, principal research scientist with CSIRO Entomology.

The size of a pinhead, the varroa mite attacks both developing larvae and adult bees, causing deformities and vulnerability to viruses that ultimately kill the entire hive. Without this parasite, which can spread disease quickly from bee to bee, Australia has managed to contain serious infections, such as the Israeli Acute Paralysis Virus – a leading cause of colony collapse in the USA.

derek

thanks... shouldn't it be +10 -3？ it doesn't really matter though

Ronny

Thanks LZ.
看到答案觉得不算复杂，咋找起来就那么费劲？
眼神儿有待提高

Ritacow

原帖由 derek 于 2009-4-20 06:57 发表
thanks... shouldn't it be +10 -3？ it doesn't really matter though

Because I deducted 2 points for correcting words that weren't wrong to begin with...
Sorry for the confusion

rogerk

也是挑错，英文太差，就看看中文，作为北方人，友情提醒搂主一下：

虽然北方，特别是北京话里，儿化音很重，但是那是口语说的时候带出来的音，写的时候没有人些类似于 “挑错儿“，“扣分儿“ 这样的词汇。大家都写成“找错”，“扣分”。

Ritacow

好的好的
我会留意 :)
谢谢指出

sweetwinds

跟英文没关系 只是rita怎么有这样的好脾气啊 都是很好地跟别人沟通 能开个帖子说说澳洲的教育和一些人生观  也可以给大家提醒一下 在澳洲职场有什么要注意的

Ritacow

恩
我觉得姜比我老的大有人可 :)
我有空就会去工作版里写一写
最近很忙

pangpang

and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

and totally wipe out our native beehives.

If they are native, they are not feral.

Ritacow

原帖由 pangpang 于 2009-4-27 00:28 发表
and totally wipe out our native feral beehives.

and totally wipe out our native beehives.

If they are native, they are not feral.

胖胖 ：）
他们可以的

Native = local (could be domesticated or cultivated)
Feral = wild (not domesticated or cultivated)