我翻译了这首最有意境的诗，包您满意。哈哈！

fredliu

马致远的《天净沙-秋思》
毫无疑问是最有意境的古诗之一，或者之最

《天净沙·秋思》

作者：马致远
译者：德江 Fred Liu

　　枯藤老树昏鸦，小桥流水人家，古道西风瘦马。

　　夕阳西下，断肠人在天涯。

        In the dead vines of an old tree perches a lifeless crow.
        By a quiet brook under a narrow bridge stands a lonely home.
        On a worn path in the west wind limps a horse thin and tired.
        The setting sun highlights a man with an exiled heart and soul.

fredliu

这首《天净沙》居然无人问津，真让人脸上无光
还是再来首苏轼的吧，这首《卜算子》堪称经典的宋词，背后还有个凄婉的故事，但不知其真假，所以就不提了。文中的“拣尽寒枝不肯栖，寂寞沙洲冷”，显然体现出了很不一般的心境。

苏轼 《卜算子·黄州定慧院寓居作》
译：德江 Fred Liu

缺月挂疏桐，漏断人初静。谁见幽人独往来，缥缈孤鸿影。
惊起却回头，有恨无人省。拣尽寒枝不肯栖，寂寞沙洲冷。

From a sycamore dangles a broken moon, on a night of settling peace. A slender figure comes and goes, graceful as a swan in dance.

Startled to look behind herself, with regrets understood by none. No branch feels satisfying enough, she nests in the chilly sand alone.


读完别忘加分啊！

lixiasong

The best I have read!

fredliu

lixiasong 发表于 2022-6-26 06:04
The best I have read!

多谢！

eleventrees

fredliu 发表于 2022-6-26 13:49
多谢！

看到這世界上還有癡人如我愛詩歌 幾乎淚目

eleventrees

我不知英文詩歌 但是詩歌的寫作基本方式 大概是略去因果的詞語 形容詞單獨擴展開 這樣意境就更加豐富

CalmDownOK

nice work

fredliu

eleventrees 发表于 2022-6-27 21:08
我不知英文詩歌 但是詩歌的寫作基本方式 大概是略去因果的詞語 形容詞單獨擴展開 這樣意境就更加豐富 ...

是的，尽量简洁，以意境连接，像草书的笔断意连一说。

fredliu

From a sycamore dangles a broken moon, on a night of settling peace. An ethereal figure comes and goes, graceful as a swan in dance.

Startled to look behind herself, with complaints understood by none. No branch feels accomodating enough, she nests alone in chilly sand.

第二首略改一下...

虞宅与美丽

eleventrees 发表于 2022-6-27 21:04
看到這世界上還有癡人如我愛詩歌 幾乎淚目

这位同学具体喜欢哪一类诗歌吗？我觉得诗歌也不算是特别小众吧，一直都有人喜欢，而且喜欢的多是真爱。

senlin

马致远这首散曲也是我最喜欢的古诗词之一。
翻译的挺好的，感谢分享

fredliu

再来一首，温庭筠的《望江南》

梳洗罢，独倚望江楼。过尽千帆皆不是，斜晖脉脉水悠悠。肠断白苹洲。


Well groomed, leaning against tower, overlooking river.
A thousand sails passing, none carrying my love, till sunset, endless water flowing.
My heart is breaking, on the Isle of Baiping.

“Looking Toward Jiangnan"
by Wen Tingyun
translated by Fred Liu
(Photo: Netherlands, from the web.)