感谢信

花开花落

以前工作过的公司里的经理给我介绍了一份工作，而且成功了，怎么写感谢信呢？或应该怎么表示感谢呢？

bluesky

dear xxxxx,
  
  how are you going recently? i am sure some body responsible like you must be very busy, so i will not write you a long email to occupy your precious time .
   i am wring this letter with many thanks and appreciation. with your recommending, i finally got this job in ***company, no words can express my appreciation to you, i feel so luckily to know you, to have ever worked with you because u are really such a fantastic person, no matter what i say, i know i cant still describe the feeling in my heart at this moment, any way, i want to say thank you from the bottom of my heart for your help , u make me feel so warm in such a thrilling winter ,thank you very much  for what u have done for me and i wish you all the best both in your life and also your career.
you sincerely
***

bluesky

i just wrote it for practice , so please dont laugh at me

bluesky

simply enough u can just send him a thank you card....

花开花落

原帖由 bluesky 于 2009-7-5 18:57 发表
dear xxxxx,
  
  how are you going recently? i am sure some body responsible like you must be very busy, so i will not write you a long email to occupy your precious time .
   i am wring this lette ...

写得很好，感谢bluesky

bluesky

原帖由 花开花落 于 2009-7-5 20:52 发表

写得很好，感谢bluesky

过奖了。

berlindut

原帖由 bluesky 于 2009-7-5 18:57 发表
dear xxxxx,
  
  how are you going recently? i am sure some body responsible like you must be very busy, so i will not write you a long email to occupy your precious time .
   i am wring this lette ...

收藏了

william.wangzy

建议你keep it short and simple, and remove words such as “i am sure some body responsible like you must be very busy, so i will not write you a long email to occupy your precious time , 太过中式的谦虚不适合. Following is one of examples

Dear xx,

Thanks for your recommendation to xxx . I have recently received an offer from xxx company. I was very excited to have the new opportunity, XX, but even more pleased that you thought well enough of me to recommend me to the company. That’s the best compliment I can imagine。

Thank you!

Sincerely,


It was a pleasure working with you. Thanks so much for your kind words.

Best regards,

william.wangzy

邮寄一个thanks card也不错

bluesky

原帖由 william.wangzy 于 2009-7-5 22:05 发表
建议你keep it short and simple, and remove words such as “i am sure some body responsible like you must be very busy, so i will not write you a long email to occupy your precious time , 太过中式的谦虚 ...

  i used to wrote a letter similar like this to my boss, and he said he was so touched, that is why i thought it was ok. ,any way, maybe u r right, we chinese always like to be very modest all the time.