刚刚在whirlpool被人说帖子not readable，我英语真那么差？

a1169377

头一次在那里发帖，结果说我的帖子读不通，英语太差了。让老公马上帮我改了下，问读得通了没，另外个人回帖No。很郁闷。我觉得如果nice起码要告诉我怎么就读不通了，不用给我个直直的no吧，我很不理解。

tumbleweed

贴在这里让大家看看？

anata_t

安慰一下。

wjsmelb

tell them "you guys really are illiterate"

a1169377

苍海一声笑 发表于 2013-2-11 14:02
贴在这里让大家看看？

删了。。。哎。。。要不我再打一遍？

jerryclark

a1169377 发表于 2013-2-11 13:04
删了。。。哎。。。要不我再打一遍？

发上来给你加分，顺便扔几块砖。嘿嘿嘿

大牛哥

我觉得对方是成心的。再差的英语也是英语，LOCOL都可以看懂的。

要不你换个中老年人多的坛子试试。

daniello

还是贴上了看一下的好

lostmyway

同意大牛哥，丫成心的

a1169377

苍海一声笑 发表于 2013-2-11 14:02
贴在这里让大家看看？

We had a billing error 8 months ago with vodafone. They mis-calculated my bill and over- charged $170 on it. We called the customer service countless times in order to solve the issue. They said they corrected the bills and  refunded the money back into my account on a specific date and retained a receipt for the refund. But there was no such refund shown on my bank statement. Last time when we rang was about 1 month ago. We told them that we would like to get a formal complaint reference number in order to fill out the TIO complaint form and they insisted to help again. After 15min on hold, the guy said they didn't refund because of a wrong account information. then my hubbie asked them why they didnt have any issue taking money out of my account but putting money in, which doesnt make any sense.

具体怎么写的已经忘了，大概就是这个意思。望指正。

kane321

不够地道，可能看起来有点累对他们来讲，不过肯定看的懂

keshia1014

可以看明白呀 少量语法错误 影响也不大 Lz英文挺好的

SUSIESWEETIE

a1169377 发表于 2013-2-11 14:26
We had a billing error 8 months ago with vodafone. They mis-calculated my bill and over- charged $ ...

我看懂了

a1169377

kane321 发表于 2013-2-11 14:29
不够地道，可能看起来有点累对他们来讲，不过肯定看的懂

求教怎么改才地道呢？

a1169377

keshia1014 发表于 2013-2-11 14:30
可以看明白呀 少量语法错误 影响也不大 Lz英文挺好的

求教，可以告诉我那里有语法错误么？谢谢

a1169377

jerryclark 发表于 2013-2-11 14:06
发上来给你加分，顺便扔几块砖。嘿嘿嘿

来加分？～嘿嘿！～

goodayaus

LZ的主要问题不是在英文，是在表达能力上，不够cut to the chase, 太啰嗦。

zn7726

我怎么觉得写得蛮好呀

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goodayaus 发表于 2013-2-11 14:35
LZ的主要问题不是在英文，是在表达能力上，不够cut to the chase, 太啰嗦。

我说中文也很罗嗦。。。哎。。。可是确实很难一句两句解释清楚。。。

michael128

a1169377 发表于 2013-2-11 14:26
We had a billing error 8 months ago with vodafone. They mis-calculated my bill and over- charged $ ...

too complicated to read, you could simplify your writting into 3 words "Vodafone is shit", then everyone would understand.

kane321

a1169377 发表于 2013-2-11 14:31
求教怎么改才地道呢？

水平不够啊，一般混论坛的不用写的那么中规中矩，口语化些，所以那些人算歧视不是local的，呵呵

hellsky

that guy is vodafone a3

coolbzk

就是感觉不是母语是英语的人写的而已，看肯定能看懂
这群Y的找抽，LZ赶紧发上去，我们给你捧场
谁说NO，让他回public school重修英语去

jerryclark

goodayaus 发表于 2013-2-11 13:35
LZ的主要问题不是在英文，是在表达能力上，不够cut to the chase, 太啰嗦。

我很赞同

a1169377

michael128 发表于 2013-2-11 14:37
too complicated to read, you could simplify your writting into 3 words "Vodafone is shit", then ev ...

能说“shxt"么？

北风

a1169377 发表于 2013-2-11 13:26
We had a billing error 8 months ago with vodafone. They mis-calculated my bill and over- charged $ ...

对于我这种英文差的人来说从句太多，太罗嗦，好像英文不好的律师信

ilovefamily

太罗嗦了。。。。。。。。。
楼主是学文科的？？？？？？？？
我们一个文科朋友给我老公写过一封英文信，也是很罗嗦，结果officer直接回email问你到底想干啥？？？？？（这个文科朋友英文很棒，英文专业毕业的）
最后我给写了一封，我英文很烂，但是理科思维，1234.。。。。比较直白，，，，officer接信后，马上按我老公的意思给办事了。。。。。。

jerryclark

感觉LZ是在讲故事，但啰里啰唆说了半天不知道论点是什么。像是考试写作文凑字数。

回头望

我觉得能看懂啊，比我写的好

a1169377

ilovefamily 发表于 2013-2-11 14:40
太罗嗦了。。。。。。。。。
楼主是学文科的？？？？？？？？
我们一个文科朋友给我老公写过一封英文信，也 ...

我学理科里的文科。。。很多时候是要写文章什么的那种。但可能是我性格太拘谨 的缘故吧，有点小强迫。。