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greenalbany

《为谁流泪》

Verse1
等不到你的安慰
我们之间有太多 不可能靠近的防备
如果学会放手 也许不再累

走不进你的心扉
就像夜空缺少了 一颗星温暖的点缀
如果时光倒流 也许还有机会

Pre-chorus1
我以为只需要用真心
我以为爱情很单纯
却忘了我只是个局外人

Chorus
我不止一次地问
我在为谁流泪
爱你就像失去了灵魂
我沉浸在你的光辉

我不止一次地问
我在为谁流泪
爱你虽然很痛
我不会后悔

Verse2
换不来你的奉陪
我们之间有太多 不可能停留的伤悲
如今半途而废 一切化成灰

留不住你的优美
就像笛声缺少了 一个人深情的灵魂
如今手拿玫瑰  不知会送给谁

Pre-chorus2
我以为只需要用真心
我以为爱情很单纯
却忘了我只是个局外人

Chorus
我不止一次地问
我在为谁流泪
爱你就像失去了灵魂
我沉浸在你的光辉

我不止一次地问
我在为谁流泪
爱你虽然很痛
我不会后悔

Post-chorus
为谁流泪
为谁流泪
为谁流泪
为谁流泪

Pre-chorus3
我以为会有人来关心
我以为爱情很完美
却忘了我只是个局外人

Chorus
我不止一次地问
我在为谁流泪
爱你就像失去了灵魂
我沉浸在你的光辉

我不止一次地问
我在为谁流泪
爱你虽然很痛
我不会后悔

Post-chorus
为谁流泪
为谁流泪
为谁流泪
为谁流泪

greenalbany

这是一首原创歌曲，希望大家喜欢并支持

BOLANGSHA

greenalbany 发表于 2020-9-26 20:53
这是一首原创歌曲，希望大家喜欢并支持

楼主是词曲唱其中的一位么？

greenalbany

我们是音乐工作室，整首歌曲从词曲到制作全部由我们自己完成。

greenalbany

这也是我们的一首原创，有关武汉疫情

《去见那个他》

Intro
Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他

Verse1
一场疫情打乱所有的计划
一场约会无可奈何地放下
相爱的人不能张开嘴巴
跳动的心不能及时应答

Pre-chorus1
一座渐渐沉寂的城
像围起了密密的篱笆
一个人和影子说话

Chorus
Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
思念像是长了草
夜晚令人害怕

Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
分离是为了重聚
Say真爱永无价

Verse2
七十六天每一天像是惩罚
七十六天每一天都在挣扎
想见不能去见多么委屈
关爱不能传达多么牵挂

Pre-chorus2
一座慢慢苏醒的城
像放了一个长长的假
脱离了思念的管辖

Chorus
Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
送他最美的鲜花
和他拥抱一下

Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
给他一生的回答
Say永远陪着他

Post-chorus
去见那个他
去见那个他
去见那个他

Bridge
坚守着爱 不忘初心
终于可以再见到他

Chorus
Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
送他最美的鲜花
和他拥抱一下

Go去见那个他
Say去见那个他
给他一生的回答
Say永远陪着他

Post-chorus
去见那个他
去见那个他
去见那个他

Outro
Say永远陪着他

greenalbany

这也是我们的原创，《去见那个他》英文版

SAY WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY


Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say

I looked at you like you looked at nobody
I trusted you more than you could ever trust me
How ironic that I found you funny
Made me look like a fool, now I'm drowning

You take my hand, you let me go
I know for you it's all a show
Don't want you back 'cause I don't care

Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
Cause I ain't going nowhere
I'm just staying right here
Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
And we can do this my way
Say what you want to say

There's nothing you mention more than my name
'Cause I've got the bravery so I've got the blame
What you tell everybody's the same
Want to control me and make me insane

I getting up, I'll take a stand
Don't need nobody to hold my hand
I've got no tears 'cause I don't care

Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
Cause I ain't going nowhere
I'm just staying right here
Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
And we can do this my way
Say what you want to say

What you want to say
What you want to say
What you want to say

You take my hand
You let me go
I know for you it's all a show

Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
Cause I ain't going nowhere
I'm just staying right here
Go where you want to go
Say what you want to say
And we can do this my way
Say what you want to say

What you want to say
What you want to say
What you want to say
Say what you want to say

greenalbany

《重归于好》


Verse1
一个人
有多好
不拥不抱

两个人
有多巧
不晚不早

Pre-chorus1  
像飞鸟
千里迢迢
像野草
历经飘摇

Chorus
重归于好
在世界一角
你吻了我
我依然心跳
重归于好
没有什么大不了
画地为牢
这世界很小


Verse2
一个人
多烦恼
无依无靠

两个人
在寻找
要多久才会再次遇到


Pre-chorus2
像蝴蝶
穿过妖娆
像信鸽
重回怀抱

Chorus
重归于好
在世界一角
你吻了我
我依然心跳
重归于好
没有什么大不了
画地为牢
这世界很小

重归于好
在世界一角
你记得我
我记得拥抱   


Chorus
重归于好
在世界一角
你吻了我
我依然心跳
重归于好
没有什么大不了
画地为牢
这世界很小

重归于好
没有什么大不了
插翅难逃
只有真心躲不掉

greenalbany

这是《重归于好》英文版，也是我们原创。

BEGIN AGAIN


Street lights dim
Wondering
If it’s over

Find the fault
Where they fall
Drifting further

Waves crashing
And wash away
Storms rolling
Begin again

Can you hear me
Through the pouring rain
Whisper memories
Carry through the pain

Can you see me
In the shadows by the light
Breaking free
Racing through the night

Roads clear out
Bring about
New adventures

Rise and fall
Through it all
’Cause there’s nothing there to worry of

Stars fading
Slowing dying
Sun rising
Begin again

Can you hear me
Through the pouring rain
Whisper memories
Carry through the pain

Can you see me
In the shadows by the light
Breaking free
Racing through the night

Can you hear me
Through the pouring rain
Whisper memories
Carry through the pain

Can you hear me
Through the pouring rain
Whisper memories
Carry through the pain

Can you see me
In the shadows by the light
Breaking free
Racing through the night

Can you hear me
At the edge of what is right
Can you see me
In the corner of your eye

出国吃考拉

在本区听到的最好听的素人作品!! 加油! !

感觉后期有点弱啊, 起码加点混响呗?

greenalbany

出国吃考拉 发表于 2020-10-2 19:10
在本区听到的最好听的素人作品!! 加油! !

感觉后期有点弱啊, 起码加点混响呗?

非常感谢你的宝贵意见，我们会加强后期制作，进一步提高水平。关于混响，当然有加，只是目前还未彻底掌握混响技术，如有懂的人，请略加指点。

greenalbany

这是一首我们2年前的作品，希望大家喜欢

OVER AGAIN

The roughest day of my life
Just happened right in front of my eyes
I cried and shouted at the world
Why did it have to be so cruel

I saw the others break and burn
Never thought I'd have a turn

So I cry and I run away
Throw my hands up and dry my face
Though it feels like the world's end
It won't take away the pain

So I open my eyes and see
Not the tears but a whole new different me
Giving up's no better than
Starting over again

No matter what the world throws at us
The good the bad the hate the love
But we don't care what's in our way
We push it over and walk away

I saw the others shatter like glass
But if I think again I'll pass

So I cry and I run away
Throw my hands up and dry my face
Though it feels like the world's end
It won't take away the pain

So I open my eyes and see
Not the tears but a whole new different me
Giving up's no better than
Starting over again

I saw the memories fade
Stories untold
I watched their hopes all go away
Young and the old
But every time they will
Get up and find their way

So I cry and I run away
Throw my hands up and dry my face
Though it feels like the world's end
It won't take away the pain

So I open my eyes and see
Not the tears but a whole new different me
Giving up's no better than
Starting over again
  

greenalbany

这也是我们的原创

greenalbany

《今天你很迷人》

Verse1
因为你的美丽在靠近
让我每分每秒希望有人陪
因为距离悄悄在拉近
让我梦里深深地陶醉

今天的你走路带着光辉
一点一点全是妩媚
你的打扮太精心
白色衬衫像一朵云
蓝色牛仔特别修身

Pre-chorus
你的眼睛在说话
眨巴眨巴勾魂
今天的你很迷人
你的笑容在吸引
俘获了我一颗心

Chorus
这个世界70亿人会遇到谁
你是我的缘分
这个时代同龄的人会遇到谁
你是我的女神

当你走到我身边的那一分钟
好像施了魔法香水
居然心跳加快甘愿做个裙下之臣
我情不自禁

Verse2
因为你是天使的化身
让我每分每秒期待爱降临
因为灵犀一点的意会
让我心中甜甜地沉醉

今天的你身上布满星辰
一颗一颗那么明媚
你的打扮太精心
烫的头发是大波浪
迈的步伐像陈乔恩

Pre-chorus
你的眼睛在说话
眨巴眨巴勾魂
今天的你很迷人
你的笑容在吸引
俘获了我一颗心

Chorus
这个世界70亿人会遇到谁
你是我的缘分
这个时代同龄的人会遇到谁
你是我的女神

当你走到我身边的那一分钟
好像施了魔法香水
居然心跳加快甘愿做个裙下之臣
我情不自禁

Pre-chorus
你的眼睛在说话
眨巴眨巴勾魂
今天的你很迷人
你的笑容在吸引
俘获了我一颗心

Chorus
这个世界70亿人会遇到谁
你是我的缘分
这个时代同龄的人会遇到谁
你是我的女神

当你走到我身边的那一分钟
好像施了魔法香水
居然心跳加快甘愿做个裙下之臣
我情不自禁

Outro
有谁能把我解救
今天你很迷人
一步两步 三步四步
步步为营 步步也惊心

greenalbany

greenalbany 发表于 2020-10-6 02:26
《今天你很迷人》

Verse1

这是《今天你很迷人》英文版，也是我们原创

MY BODY, MY PROPERTY

Everybody’s always telling me
That a woman’s any good as a man
Believe in who I know I’m supposed to be
‘Cause everybody else is taken

But now all these guys are coming along
Tryna tell me how to live my life
They think they’re so much better
When I’m really just as clever
And I’m ready to put up a fight

‘Cause I’m tired of hearing
That I don’t know what’s best
It’s someone else’s choice
And I’m done with this oppression
I’m making this loud and clear

You don’t get to say what I do with my body
‘Cause my body’s my own
And you don’t get to act like you understand me
‘Cause I doubt that you do
Got all these people tryna put words in my mouth
But no one even hears my shouts
So I just want you to know my body, my property
And you can’t have it

Everybody puts on a pretty face
Like they accept everyone
A flower on the surface hides a snake
And covers all the damage done

But now they have finally gone too far
They’ve stepped across the line
The fire’s been ignited
And we’re not gonna be silent
We’ll be heard tonight

‘Cause I’m tired of guessing
When everyone’s pretending
Who’s fake and who’s a friend yeah
I’m done with keeping quiet
I’m making this loud and clear

You don’t get to say what I do with my body
‘Cause my body’s my own
And you don’t get to act like you understand me
‘Cause I doubt that you do
Got all these people tryna put words in my mouth
But no one even hears my shouts
So I just want you to know my body, my property
And you can’t have it

‘Cause I’m tired of letting
Everybody else win
Don’t I deserve something
I’m done with sitting back yeah
I’m making this loud and clear

You don’t get to say what I do with my body
‘Cause my body’s my own
And you don’t get to act like you understand me
‘Cause I doubt that you do
Got all these people tryna put words in my mouth
But no one even hears my shouts
So I just want you to know my body, my property
And you can’t have it

My body, my property
And you can’t have it no
Yeah my body yeah my body
Yeah my body is my property

jasyangau

不错不凑，太有才啦

greenalbany

《最好朋友》

Verse 1
难过的时候
是你陪在我身边 给我安抚
是你陪在我身边 给我照顾
我的最好朋友

迷茫的时候
是你陪在我身边 给我搀扶
是你陪在我身边 给我帮助
我的最好朋友

Pre-chorus 1
是你是你默默付出为我分忧
是你是你默默付出为我解愁
是你是你和我一起患难与共前行
给我快乐给我光明

Chorus
你是我今生最真心的朋友
风雨中留下那美丽的风景
一路上浇灌那纯洁的心灵
并肩同行 奔赴着前程

你是我今生最真心的朋友
守望着夜空那灿烂的群星
追逐着天边那温柔的春风
自始至终 你在我左右

你在我左右
我最好朋友

Verse 2
开心的时候
是你陪在我身边 给我鼓舞
是你陪在我身边 给我满足
我的最好朋友

Pre-chorus 2
是你是你默默付出为我加油
是你是你默默付出为我祝福
是你是你和我一直心有灵犀相通
给我快乐给我感动

Chorus
你是我今生最真心的朋友
风雨中留下那美丽的风景
一路上浇灌那纯洁的心灵
并肩同行 奔赴着前程

你是我今生最真心的朋友
守望着夜空那灿烂的群星
追逐着天边那温柔的春风
自始至终 你在我左右

你在我左右
你在我左右
我最好朋友

greenalbany

这首歌是《最好朋友》的英文版，也是我们词曲并制作

DREAMERS


My father told me
Don’t take your chances
‘Cause I won’t get many
So quit my dreaming
Get up and start moving
Make every moment count

I try to listen
But it’s so boring when
Life could be different
One second I’m here
The next I’m somewhere
On the other half of the world

Last minute buy a ticket for a plane to LA
Won’t call until the morning just to say we’re okay
The bright lights in the city take our breath away, away
So we’re gonna make plans to stay

‘Cause we are the dreamers
We won’t ever let go
We are the believers
We’ll let everybody know
However the world turns
Don’t think that we’re getting low
‘Cause we are the dreamers, believers

‘Cause we are the dreamers
We’ll always be flying high
We are the believers
We’ll set everybody right
However the world turns
Don’t think that we’re getting low
‘Cause we are the dreamers, believers
And we won’t let go

And we won’t let go

My mother told me
Go study hard so you can
Do better than me
But she can’t tell me
Who I want to be
I think of that myself

We gotta go meet up with a producer today
Now hurry up get ready ‘cause we’re gonna be late
Let’s make a good impression blow their minds away, away
‘Cause we’re gonna make plans to stay

‘Cause we are the dreamers
We won’t ever let go
We are the believers
We’ll let everybody know
However the world turns
Don’t think that we’re getting low
‘Cause we are the dreamers, believers

‘Cause we are the dreamers
We’ll always be flying high
We are the believers
We’ll set everybody right
However the world turns
Don’t think that we’re getting low
‘Cause we are the dreamers, believers
And we won’t let go

And we won’t let go

And we won’t let go

greenalbany

原创歌曲《See Myself in You》

SEE MYSELF IN YOU

Never thought I’d see you walk away
I keep that final moment on replay
the ups and downs are mountains when we’re done
But every time I know that you’ll come back

said I can wait, we’ll take it from the start
Cause nothing’s ever tearing us apart

You sing a song that I don’t know
You close the curtains, steal the show
it’s what we want and I don’t care
’bout what it takes to get there
you make me laugh, you’ve seen me cry
I’m falling for you, don’t know why
I close my eyes and see myself in you

I had never meant to let you down
The two of us amidst this lonely town
You complete me, you’re my missing piece
The only part of me that they can’t see, yeah

You sing a song that I don’t know
You close the curtains, steal the show
it’s what we want and I don’t care
’bout what it takes to get there
you make me laugh, you’ve seen me cry
I’m falling for you, don’t know why
I close my eyes and see myself in you

and now the ties are breaking
cause I’m tired waiting
wishing you would just come back to me
so I'll have my missing piece
and now your path is turning
And back to me you're running
’til you’re standing right in front of me

You sing a song that I don’t know
You close the curtains, steal the show
it’s what we want and I don’t care
’bout what it takes to get there

You sing a song that I don’t know
You close the curtains, steal the show
it’s what we want and I don’t care
’bout what it takes to get there
you make me laugh, you’ve seen me cry
I’m falling for you, don’t know why
I close my eyes and see myself in you

I close my eyes and see myself in you
  

greenalbany

原创歌曲《Pass Me By》

PASS ME BY

Met you one September night
Underneath a corner light
You were young, I was dumb
Did we know that it was love?
When I let you pass me by

Then you took me by the hand
To a place I’ve never been
You were lonely, I was bored
Told me you were such a fool
‘Cause you let me pass you by

So take me in your arms and look me in the eyes
I just want you to know, I won’t let you go
All the plans we made let’s leave them all behind
‘Cause I won’t let you pass me by

Didn’t see you till that summer
With your hand on top of hers
But every moment, every hour
I keep missing what was ours
‘Cause I let you pass me by

When the leaves fall down once more
Saw you standing at my door
Said, “Baby, I can’t forget
‘Cause my mind’s filled with regret
That I let you pass me by”

So take me in your arms and look me in the eyes
I just want you to know, I won’t let you go
All the plans we made let’s leave them all behind
‘Cause I won’t let you pass me by

Pass me by (x4)

So take me in your arms and look me in the eyes
I just want you to know, I won’t let you go
All the plans we made let’s leave them all behind
‘Cause I won’t let you pass me by

Pass me by (x4)

suez。

完美设计编导锻造出了一个男猪脚深切渴望被崇拜追随的方程式，结构细思极恐意念斐然，有才   除了歌词有点薄，多少流于浮而无心

greenalbany

suez。 发表于 2020-10-16 07:20
完美设计编导锻造出了一个男猪脚深切渴望被崇拜追随的方程式，结构细思极恐意念斐然，有才   除了 ...

很深刻的评论，希望多加指点，谢谢！
另，能否告知该评论针对哪首歌曲，还是泛指？

suez。

greenalbany 发表于 2020-10-16 12:44
很深刻的评论，希望多加指点，谢谢！
另，能否告知该评论针对哪首歌曲，还是泛指？ ...

不客气。无论亲情友情爱情，真诚的情感一定会自然或深沉，轻浮的热烈往往裹挟虚伪，更勿论狡黠
仅仅个人浅见  理解不当之处请见谅哈