参加书评活动 - The Wump World

jamesandethan

参加书评活动，草鞋族需要儿子的书评帮我加分。儿子九岁，最近开始学习写书评。

Book  Title:   The  Wump World
The Wump World is a great book written and illustrated by Bill Peet. It’s about a type of animal named ‘the wump,’ which looks like a cross between a moose and capybara.

The wumps live on a beautiful grassy planet named The Wump World where food was plentiful and there were no predators. But one day, some creatures named pollutians invade the planet, and send the poor wumps hiding in an underground cavern. Many years later, The Wump World became so polluted by the factories that the pollutians built that they had to leave. Read the book to find out what happened to the wumps, and if The Wump World will ever be the same again.

My opinion about this book is that it’s short, but very good. I liked how Bill Peet tried to tell the reader to stop polluting the planet through a short, fun story. The wumps were amazing creatures and the pollutians were fun to read about. But I didn’t really like the ending, how the pollutians just gave up. I mean, they didn’t even get to see the wumps, and the ending’s a bit simple. Bill Peet could have made the pollutians seem more dangerous and exciting. Overall, this was a great book, and it’s excellent for anyone who likes the sound of ‘wump creatures.’
When I found this book in my teacher’s reading box, I thought it looked pretty interesting so I read it. I would give this book a 4.0 out of 5 stars, and recommend it for all ages.

viviancn

lz可以让他改写下结尾，如果他有兴趣的话

swifts

写得很好。真实自然，漂亮的书评。

zfsunny

写的有趣！

jamesandethan

viviancn 发表于 2018-6-6 11:34
lz可以让他改写下结尾，如果他有兴趣的话

当然有兴趣！群主能给点建议吗？怎样改写好？

viviancn

jamesandethan 发表于 2018-6-6 13:10
当然有兴趣！群主能给点建议吗？怎样改写好？

可以让他从某个章节接起，接下来任他自由发挥了

jamesandethan

再发一篇，马上就可以换鞋了！

Title: The Enormous Crocodile

The Enormous Crocodile is an excellent book written by Roald Dahl and illustrated by Quentin Blake. It’s about an enormous crocodile that tries to eat children, but fails every time!

The Enormous Crocodile loves eating children, it’s basically his hobby. He tries to eat them in four clever attempts, in which he calls ‘clever tricks.’ The children are saved by four smart animals: Humpy-Rumpy the hippo, Muggle-Wump the monkey, the Roly-Poly Bird and Trunky the elephant. The Enormous Crocodile goes on exciting adventures, trying to find yummy children to eat! Read this awesome book to find out if the Enormous Crocodile continues his evil ways, or is gotten rid of once and for all.

My opinion is that this book is lovely, with an amazing tale about the Enormous Crocodile who loves to eat children. The animals and the children were very interesting, and the illustrations were absolutely beautiful! My favourite scene was when the Enormous Crocodile was talking to the Notsobig One about delicious children that he would like to eat. I liked this scene because it’s very fun, and it starts off the book. What I disliked about this book is that it’s very short, and Roald Dahl definitely could have made this book longer, to make it more interesting and exciting. It’s also a bit repetitive, how the animals kept saying the same thing, when the Enormous Crocodile was walking through the jungle.

When I saw this book at a book shop, I knew I was looking for it, so my grandma got it for me. This is essential for anyone who likes fables and Roald Dahl books.  I would give The Enormous Crocodile a  4.1 out of 5 stars, and recommend it for ages 8-11.

东东

足迹中的宝宝都这么厉害。

viviancn

jamesandethan 发表于 2018-6-8 17:06
再发一篇，马上就可以换鞋了！

Title: The Enormous Crocodile

写得很好，特别是summary，懂得有所保留吸引别人来读。晚上叫我家娃来看看。

欢迎继续分享，分分肯定有

jamesandethan

viviancn 发表于 2018-6-8 17:49
写得很好，特别是summary，懂得有所保留吸引别人来读。晚上叫我家娃来看看。

欢迎继续分享，分分肯定有: ...

会的会的！我会鼓励他继续写，帮妈妈多嫌分分！