删 。。。

tom2010

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-5-12 12:46 发表
Hi guys - who had emailed me last night (but I think by then I was already in bed  :) ). I saw your emails this morning quickly before leaving for work.

Sorry I would not be able to reply your email ...

楼主的英文差了点啊！

心湖

Hi Tom

First of all, thank you for helping this blog to re-surface after months of hibernation.

Seconly, I want to thank you for giving attention to this so insignicant note posted awhile ago. Nevertheless, your response has intrigued me in some way. If writing English in this space is offensive to you, then I apologise. As I said, I have no access to Chinese input at work and often time it is most convinient and expedient to just reply in English. But, if you are an expert in English language then I am more than happy to hear the subtantiation of your comment. A bit of articulation on your conclusive remark would be of great help to me. I look forward to hearing and learning from you.

Hope to hear back from you soon Tom.

LakeofReflection

fanfanddt

LZ还没找到么，半年啦，看我咋样，除了没钱，没样，没才，其他都不算差了

laurenhutton

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-5-12 12:46 发表
Hi guys - who had emailed me last night (but I think by then I was already in bed   ). I saw your emails this morning quickly before leaving for work.

Sorry I would not be able to reply your emails during the day as work has extreme security system in place and blocked all the internet mail accounts.  (Please be patient with me).

But, I will return each and every one of your emails when I get home tonight regardless whether or not I think we are suitable. Unless I can see straight away that you are not genuine and just wanting to see my photos or have fun. In that case, I suggest that please have some of you self-respect intacted, instead of letting me to rudely reject you.

楼主的英文。。。。。。。。哈哈哈哈哈！
拍照留念。

宥佚

还没招到？

心湖

Haha... I see the typo.... well, you just have to excuse me/or more like I am excusing myself, when wrote in a hurry ...Tom, were you referring to the typo I had on that note? or  was it syntax, or something else? Anyway, I will be very interested to hear from you.

Lauren, do I know you or you know of me??

In response to other questions posed to me? Yes, I have planned to provide an update tonight of my relationship status, to satisfy your inquisitive minds, if I get to it, or you may have to wait a bit longer. :)

liming82

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-5-16 21:26 发表
Thanks! From memory you also had a post awhile ago. I wish you will also  find your truth love if you are still looking. :)

这么差的英语你也敢拿出来? 你写英语的时候到底知不知道那些单词是什么意思的啊?

楼主估计是来哄大家开心的吧。既然这样就上照片吧

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Luckypeanut

OMG

看了第一页印象特好， 想祝福lz来着。

可是， 到了最后一页， 晕菜了
lz这英文也忒雷人了点儿。。。

不能再看
逃了

liming82

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-5-12 12:46 发表
Hi guys - who had emailed me last night (but I think by then I was already in bed   ). I saw your emails this morning quickly before leaving for work.

Sorry I would not be able to reply your emails during the day as work has extreme security system in place and blocked all the internet mail accounts.  (Please be patient with me).

But, I will return each and every one of your emails when I get home tonight regardless whether or not I think we are suitable. Unless I can see straight away that you are not genuine and just wanting to see my photos or have fun. In that case, I suggest that please have some of you self-respect intacted, instead of letting me to rudely reject you.

NND,你到底是英语真的这么差劲还是你来这里发帖是你吃饱了撑的啊？

liming82

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-11-23 13:52 发表
Hi Tom

First of all, thank you for helping this blog to re-surface after months of hibernation.

Seconly, I want to thank you for giving attention to this so insignicant note posted awhile ago. Nevertheless, your response has intrigued me in some way. If writing English in this space is offensive to you, then I apologise. As I said, I have no access to Chinese input at work and often time it is most convinient and expedient to just reply in English. But, if you are an expert in English language then I am more than happy to hear the subtantiation of your comment. A bit of articulation on your conclusive remark would be of great help to me. I look forward to hearing and learning from you.

Hope to hear back from you soon Tom.

LakeofReflection

真想给你扣分。这样的英语还拿到征婚帖子上来炫耀？
我走了。实在是看不下去了。

心湖

英文就这水平，不是哄你。见谅了。难道这也受人歧视阿。现在才知道一些新来移民因英语不好受人歧视的现象是怎么回事了。是怎样的人才会去对别人的＂弱点＂冷嘲热讽呢＂？你看到了吗？

心湖

打字的时候很匆忙，不少typo，刺你眼了。你言外之意，我就不做回答了。：）

liming82

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-11-23 13:52 发表
Hi Tom

First of all, thank you for helping this blog to re-surface after months of hibernation.

Seconly, I want to thank you for giving attention to this so insignicant note posted awhile ago. Nevertheless, your response has intrigued me in some way. If writing English in this space is offensive to you, then I apologise. As I said, I have no access to Chinese input at work and often time it is most convinient and expedient to just reply in English. But, if you are an expert in English language then I am more than happy to hear the subtantiation of your comment. A bit of articulation on your conclusive remark would be of great help to me. I look forward to hearing and learning from you.

Hope to hear back from you soon Tom.

LakeofReflection

是的，我是看到了你上面的回帖的时候才知道你是怎样对待自己的错误和你是怎样的冷嘲热讽人的。
继续炫耀你的“英语”吧！

fanfanddt

LS几个讽刺LZ英文程度的人会不会太过了。哪只眼睛看到LZ是来炫耀了，人家写英文，LZ自然用英文回。看到别人不如自己的地方就开始拼命踩，看到鬼佬学中文没说好的时候你会去踩几脚吗？小市民的劣根性

白桦树

楼主的英文真的不敢恭维。请问楼主在哪里高就啊？

顺便说一下，凭一份稳定的洗碗工或者是体力活可不行哦。

LifesoCool

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-11-23 17:01 发表
Haha... I see the typo.... well, you just have to excuse me/or more like I am excusing myself, when wrote in a hurry ...Tom, were you referring to the typo I had on that note? or  was it syntax, or so ...

GOOGLE翻译的吗？？看着太像机器翻译的了

hellomotorola

看了楼主的帖子, 从头到尾楼主都挺诚恳的, 楼主也并没有炫耀英文. 不知道为啥有人就看不顺眼?

楼主, 我支持你.

cometoau

顶楼主。 从楼主的字里行间里感觉楼主挺真诚的。 仔细看了，楼主的英文表达的意思很清楚。作为一个中国人，不要说英文有时候打字错误，就算中文，偶尔打错字，用错字也在所难免。

午饭时间让洋人同事看了下，说除了几个Spelling问题，整篇意思非常明了，表达清晰。楼主无需怀疑自己的英文水平。

人并非完人，纵然别人有瑕疵，我们也应该鼓励，而不是冷嘲热讽。

楼主无需别人的看法而影响自己的心情。网路是虚拟的，把握好现实中的幸福才是最重要的。

miller2

楼主条件很好， 如果能上照片成功率会大大升高

mabella

原帖由 liming82 于 2011-11-23 19:39 发表
I will return each and every one of your emails...

You are not trying to tell us that you don't know what "return" means, are you?
Not only are there heaps of spelling mistakes, there are also lots of grammar and sentence structure problems.
But you are just going to blame it all on your "typo", right?

There was a local Aussie member here who was critised for his poor command of the English language, so it's quite alright for others to critise you for the same problem. But the difference between him and you is that he admits his problems and therefore he earns the respect that comes with the admission.

[ 本帖最后由 mabella 于 2011-11-24 18:06 编辑 ]

mignon

Marbella - Please do not embarrass yourself by criticising other’s writing when your own command of the English language has obvious limitations, just by looking at the few paragraphs you've provided above.

People have to acknowledge that this is a chat website after all, and you are allowed to write under whatever condition you may find yourself at the time, either in a hurry or drunk, etc ...  After all who cares!
Whoever started this, I suspect, was either too idle or is a bully. Cyber bullying is a crime!!

Anyway, I think enough has been said and it is time to drop this topic.  Have a good weekend everyone.

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tom2010

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-11-23 13:52 发表
Hi Tom

First of all, thank you for helping this blog to re-surface after months of hibernation.

Seconly, I want to thank you for giving attention to this so insignicant note posted awhile ago. Neve ...

你的英文差到什么程度，怎样的差，楼上不少TX已经看出来了。。。。

Effie2011

laurenhutton

原帖由 mignon 于 2011-11-25 16:33 发表
Marbella - Please do not embarrass yourself by criticising other’s writing when your own command of the English language has obvious limitations, just by looking at the few paragraphs you've provided ...

这个，不必了吧。人家是说得有道理的。
知错能改才是好孩子。

albbhssdd

看了半天，没有年龄呀？没年龄还征什么婚呀?

不过按照她写的对男的要求是29到34，那她应该29以下，收入还能10万+，超级抢手呀

tom2010

我赌楼主31-32岁。
现在流行姐弟恋，男的小3岁是正常的。
奇怪为什么楼主这么的有钱，市场的反应还是那么的冷淡。
按道理来说现在的拜金男不比拜金女少啊。

crippledcat

"29-34岁左右，1米8左右, 工作不错  – 稳定、收入10万上",

光这几条, 刷掉了百分之八九十候选人.

orientboy

原帖由 心湖 于 2011-5-8 22:40 发表
有这样的你吗？

一个已经长大了的男孩，尝过了感情和生活的波澜与挫折，但并没有消沉、麻木；心却因此变强大了，找到了自己的位子，知道了自己想要什么了， 对生活更加积极有梦想了；因为你诚实，勇敢，敢于承担，心胸宽广，善良，幽默，聪明，有 ...

这样的人现实中其实很木讷，未必是楼主喜欢的类型。

fengzhongdeyezi

看了众多楼上的回帖，楼主是来征婚，她的英文程度如何，好像不影响她跟她未来的那位的交流吧，除非他是非中文人士。 宽以待人嘛。 何必揪着别人的小尾巴而不放呢？ 从另一个角度来说，干嘛不欣赏楼主的勇敢------不怕拙以见人呢？那就是真实的她 ！！

Murphy

有没有这样的你？此文章由 心湖 原创或转贴，不代表本站立场和观点，版权归 oursteps.com.au和作者 心湖 所有！转贴必须注明作者、出处和本声明，并保持内容完整！

有这样的你吗？

一个已经长大了的男孩，尝过了感情和生活的波澜与挫折，但并没有消沉、麻木；心却因此变强大了，找到了自己的位子，知道了自己想要什么了， 对生活更加积极有梦想了；因为你诚实，勇敢，敢于承担，心胸宽广，善良，幽默，聪明，有自信。

如果你在29-34岁左右，1米8左右，长相就那样，让我看得上就行，又是就喜欢我这样的：善良，认真又有点小孩气，聪明又简单；和你差不多的年龄，1米68，50Kg 左右，长得挺好看，工作不错  – 稳定、收入10万上；喜欢贴近大自然，去郊外爬爬山，沙滩上跑跑步，听听音乐，gym里跳跳pop、jazz,全世界走走看看人情风俗。

如果有这样你，那就让我们相识、相爱、相守，共同努力，不离不弃，甜甜蜜蜜的过一辈子吧！

请在网内发短信吧，或发邮件到 lakeofreflection@hotmail.com。 :)

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