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楼主很强大
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感謝分享!樓主真的是太厲害了(monkey09)

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lz 强大

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lz 强大

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马上要考雅思了,lz是榜样

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转入主题,继续上菜,单一观点式 (一) Statement A about AAA. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 这个大家仔细看啊,重点
1、 I full agree with the argument that (1) 支持观点 A. For one thing (2) 支持观点 A 的原因之一。For another,
(3) 支持观点 A 的原因之二。History has told us that (4) 历史证明 A 的正确性。 For example, (5) 举例证明。Furthermore, (6) 进一步阐述 A 的正确性。But some people stubbornly cling to (7) 人们反对观点 A. If we listen to these people we will (8) 听从那些人会产生的后果。 In conclusion, I think we should not (9) 我们不应该怎麽做。On the contrary, we should (10) 我们应该怎麽做。
2、According to the opinion of some people , there are quite different attitudes towards AAA. Some claim that (1) 人们的观点 AAA. However, I cannot agree (2) 我反对观点 AAA. First, (3) 我反对 AAA 的第一个理由。That is to say (4) 进一步阐述。 Second, (5) 我反对 AAA 的第二个理由。In fact, (6) 举例说明。 Finally, (7) 我反对 AAA 的第三个理由。To sum up, (8) 总结我的观点。But it is also necessary to stress that (9) 退一步总结。
3、It is often said that (1) 题目所给的观点。Those who hold this view say that (2) 进一步阐述该观点。I disagree with this point of view for the following reasons. The first and foremost one is (3) 我反对的理由之一。History presented many examples(4) 举例说明。 My second reason is (5) 我反对的理由之二。We can learn this from the saying “(6) 用一句谚语说明 ”. Finally, it seems to be true that (7) 此处填入该观点的可取之处。But (8) 我反对的
理由之三。All in all, I firmly believe that (9) 总结我的观点。
4、The problem is a much debated one in that it affects everybody in their daily lives. People may prefer one to another, although some have no opinion about it. But if I am concerned, I find it hard to agree with AAA. First of all, (1) 我反对 AAA 的第一个理由。It is common in daily life that(2) 举例说明。Another thing I should point out is that (3) 我反对 AAA 的第二个理由。Moreover,(4) 我反对 AAA 的第三个理由。In general, AAA may have something right in special cases. But it is necessarily a bad thing to (5)AAA 的缺陷。To my mind, (6) 总结我的观点。
5、There is a growing tendency these days for people to do AAA. Many people criticize this because they think (1) 人们观点 AAA. They also say that (2) 进一步阐述观点 AAA. But it seems to me that AAA is useful to (3)AAA 的好处之一。I firmly believe that it is not only useful but also necessary to (4)AAA 的好处之二。Examples can be easily found (5) 举例说明。As a result, (6) 进一步说明 AAA 的好处。So, based on the above discussion, I argue that (7) 总结我的观点。
(二)给一个论点,主要是对两个事务进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。具体表现如下: A is superior to B in DOING C. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer.
1、Something we all cannot neglect as we get older is to accept the opinions of others. On the question whether it is better to CHOOSE A or CHOOSE B, I have long admitted that A has a strong argument. Privately ,however,(1) 提出自己的观点支持 B. I disagree with the above statement and support the superiority of B. Although(2)A 具备的优势。There is no evidence to suggest that (3)A 胜于 B. What’s more, (4)A 的一个缺点。It also has been said that (5)A 的第二个缺点。To be sure, (6) 支持 B 的一个理由。 Another thing why I dispute the statement above is that I am very sure that (7) 支持 B 的另一个理由。For example, (8) 举例说明。In conclusion, A could never equal B (9)A 和 B 的比较,总结观点。
2、This controversy describes the dilemma faced by many people. As for me, I agree with the above statement that A is superior to B in DOING C. It is an obvious fact that (1) 赞同 A 比 B 好的第一个原因。For instance, (2) 举例说明。Another reason I should point out lies in the fact that (3) 赞同 A 比 B 好的第二个原因。In today’s world,(4) 举例说明。This may explain why A is better than B. on the other hand , a common sense goes that (5)B 的劣势之一。Moreover, (6)B 的劣势之二。To conclude,(7) 总结我的观点。
命题形式三:开放观点式 Argument A (and B) about DOING C . What’s your opinion about it ?
1、An important question facing us today is (1) 提出问题。 Some argue that (2) 观点 A. For example, (3) 举例说明观点 A. Again, (4) 进一步阐述观点 A. Opponents of this view say that (5) 观点 B. They claim that (6) 全面阐述 B. In my part, there are merits to both of these arguments. We should (7) 我们应该赞同 A 。At the same time, (8) 同时也不能忽视 B.
2、Nowadays almost everyone discusses about whether AAA is desirable. People’s views on it are different. Some people believe A. they argue that (1) 阐述观点 A. People who believe B, on the other hand ,argue that (2) 阐述观点 B. They maintain that (3) 进一步阐述观点B. There is certain some truth on both sides, yet neither provides a satisfactory answer. In my view, (4) 我的观点。We should (5) 进一步阐述我的观点。As such, (6) 这样做能带来的好处。
3、AAA is a question of controversy. People have different notions about the matter: some hold that (1) 观点 A. Others think (2) 观点 B. Therefore, I would like to have a look at the question in this essay. One of the strong points is that (3)AAA 的优势之一。Moreover, (4)AAA 的优势之二。In fact, (5) 举例说明。On the other hand, (6)AAA 的劣势之一。In addition, (7)AAA 的劣势之二。For example, (8) 举例说明。As shown above, I would like to say that (9) 总结我的观点。So, each case should be reviewed and concluded on the basis of facts.
4、People who support AAA hold that (1) 观点 A. Perhaps this is true, but it can not be denied that (2) 我提出反对意见。 I think it is important to take a glance at the argument on both sides. On one side ,people may have reasons to believe AAA. The most important reason is (3) 人们支持 AAA 的理由之一。In addition,(4) 人们支持 AAA 的理由之二。For instance, (5) 举例说明。Moreover, (6) 人们支持 AAA 的理由之三。On the other hand, people who attack AAA claim that (7) 观点 B. They also say that there will be problems of (8)AAA 带来的问题。 As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that everything in the world has its own two sides. Generally, AAA is acceptable in some cases. However, problems do exist. We should take more efficient measures to avoid and minimize them.
5、Nowadays, (1) 题目中问题。However, this situation has raised controversy. Some people say that(2) 观点 A. They point out that (3) 进一步阐述观点 A. For example,(4) 举例说明。On the other hand, others say that (5) 观点 B. In my opinion, neither side is completely right. It is true that (6) 我的观点。For instance, (7) 举例说明。However, (8) 从反面来平衡我的观点。

还有最后一种题型了,我要黔驴技穷了,争取尽快完成。

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nicolezh + 2 感谢分享 持续关注 顶楼主

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有一个高人,佩服
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太厉害了!

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最后一个命题了

命题形式四:报告文 A specific problem AAA, suggest possible solutions (A,B,……)or recommendations (A,B,……). Give reasons for your answer.
1、Nowadays AAA has become a serious problem in many countries. The reasons for this behavior are not clear , but some sociologists claim that (1) 社会学家认为导致问题的原因。As a matter of fact, (2) 进一步阐述此问题的原因。Consequently, (3) 该原因产生的结果。In my point of view, a possible cause of the problem is that (4) 我认为导致问题的原因之一。Also, (5) 我人们导致问题的原因之二。The effects of this are well known, (6)AAA 造成的影响之一。Furthermore, (7)AAA 造成的影响结果之二。The cost to society is great.(8) 社会上付出的代价。To conclude, I recommend that the only sensible way to solve this problem is (9) 总结并提出建议。
2、People how are well aware of the problems AAA creates: (1)AAA 带来的问题。 The solution, I think, is for government to (2) 政府所要解决的问题。 One way is that (3) 措施之一。There is also another way (4) 措施之二。 Moreover, (5) 措施之三。Indeed, we should make great efforts to solve this problem(6) 总结自己的观点。
3、In most countries AAA is causing a considerable number of problems. In some countries it is difficult to (1) 阐述 AAA 带来的第一个问题。In addition, (2)AAA 带来的第二个问题。Also,(3)AAA 带来的第三个问题。In my opinion, there are two main solutions to the discussed question. Firstly, (4) 第一个解决方案。Secondly, (5) 第二个解决方案。This is beginning to have an effect in some countries. I believe that other countries will also take this way to solve the problem in the near future. To sum up, if the problem continues, the effects will be great. So we should (6) 总结观点。
4、 It is very difficult to (1) 提出问题。There have been several attempts, but they have had generally little or no success. There methods are usually ineffective for many reasons. First, (2) 这些方法不奏效的原因之一。Second,(3) 这些方法不奏效的原因之二。In addition, (4) 这些方法不奏效的原因之三。Another attempt is (5) 提出另一种尝试。In my opinion, this is a waste of money and labor, (6) 我认为这种尝试不奏效的原因之一。Also,(7) 我人们这种尝试不奏效的原因之二。To conclude, no current methods as mentioned above are effective. I think governments as well as individuals need to work harder to find a realistic solution.
5、One of the most challenging problems of today’s world is that (1) 提出问题。It’s not only a question of the government but also a question of the individuals. I would like to discuss the possible solutions. First, (2) 第一个解决方案。The advantage of this solution is that (3) 第一个解决方案的优点点。 The second one is (4) 第二个解决方案。 By this method,(5) 第二个解决方案的优点。Unfortunately, this is not a truly available solution as the reality in our country shows. Another way of solving the problem is to (6) 第三个解决方案。This does not seem a very fair one because (7) 第三个解决方案不好的原因。One further solution here I can find is (8) 第四个解决方案。However, (9) 第四个解决方案的不足之处。In sum, it’s true that we can not find a definite solution for this problem. Each of the solution I presented has both advantages and disadvantages. But I believe it can be only a matter of time in the future.

大功告成

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参与人数 2积分 +13 收起 理由
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黑羊 + 3 谢谢奉献

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哎哟喂!这么好的帖子我怎么今天才看到,要是我早点看,作文也不至于裸考啊~~

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MARK,虽然不知道自己这辈子是不是还需要考IELTS
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牛人啊!太强了!

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楼主牛人啊

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offer下来了, deakin uni,master of teaching,csp。三月初开学,我预产期2月初,这下有的忙了

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future_gwen + 2 帖子两年多了,但依然非常鼓舞人。希望多向.
aicjt + 6 补交的分

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完全赞同:

“英语学习学无止境”!
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lz的这篇文章 希望能让我挤进大学的门

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好像教育界的人士英文水平都比较高。

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太强了,收藏先。我一妊娠反应就只能举白旗,无论事大事小

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原帖由 苗苗的家 于 2012-7-5 20:55 发表
lz的这篇文章 希望能让我挤进大学的门

那这位小姐,现在。。。。。在什么地方混呢

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真好!

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mark
thanks
i am going to take the test as well soon
so your topic is really helpful
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首先佩服楼主写作8
但是模版最多可以让人背到6点5,请不要误导大众
你到8不是因为模版好,而是本事英语水平高
从小到大我也考了15次雅思吧,就写作没到过8,按照我和身边朋友的看法,7分开始都得靠逻辑,8分得靠native的了

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