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娃说也有可能写的是这篇，这是平时的一个续写习作，现在她也搞不清写的到底是哪篇了。
With the normal curiosity of a twelve year old boy, Daniel was way ahead of them and exploring the huge backyard. Beyond the stables stood an old shack, overgrown and sadly run-down. There was many holes in the walls, which were cloaked with rust.
Daniel reached for the door handle and tried to turn it. However, this was too locked, so as his father had done, Daniel took out his handkerchief, spat on it and scrubbed at the murky glass in the single window. Pressing his nose to the glass, he peered in. For a few seconds he could see nothing but his own reflection, but then the reflection took on a new shape and Daniel found himself staring into the black eyes of a dirty bearded on the other side of the glass. With a yell of surprise, Daniel bolted. (This is an excerpt from a children’s book)
It must have been minutes until Daniel stopped running. He was quite out of breath, but now the thing that scared him was that he was lost, truly lost. He quickly scanned his surroundings. A tall wooden fence which had a large hole through it, a big gum tree and the misty sky. Behind the fence was the old shack. He had ran all the way to the neighbour’s house! “The farmland is so big, I must of ran so far. But the farmland has a few trees with low grass so it will be easy to find my way.” Daniel thought as he climbed through the hole in the fence, pushing in his belly so it didn’t get spiked against the jagged edges of the fence.
Daniel realised he was now at the back door. The back door was made of straw with a wooden handle. Without hesitation, Daniel turned it. The door made a creaking sound and then it slowly opened, revealing a narrow passageway with blue walls and a very low ceiling. Daniel crawled inside. He only could crawl, the ceiling couldn't be higher than one and a quarter metres.
Daniel continued to crawl. The passageway seemed endless, but how come the shack was so small? Daniel found out that he was going spirally around the house. A few minutes later he found himself where the front door had been, only inside. He looked through the window this time, but it only showed a crying baby with no hair. Daniel quickly bolted ahead. He continued to go in the spiral direction until he came upon a large circular room painted in the same blue color. It was nearly vacant with just a few papers on the floor and an immense shelf tucked in the farthest corner. The shelf itself contained many sockets on every side, and on the inside more sockets were there. “Probably ten billion sockets.” Daniel thought. He was still trying to be quiet, in case the bearded man came again. He reached for one of the papers. In large, bold letters, it read “THE HOUSE OF DESTINY. SEE YOUR FUTURE AND PAST”. Daniel looked down, realising he was the bearded man and the crying baby.
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面子产品大交流之不成体系篇 (2007-3-25) 苏苏 
发表于 2020-4-12 03:11
不错。。。。
