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[原创作品] 英文小说:A Shadow in Surfers Paradise (1) 天堂之影 [复制链接]

发表于 2014-8-3 12:33 |显示全部楼层
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by He Mu

Part I


Chapter 1       




From the noisy Esplanade, he strolls down to the beach, with a feeling that he is thrown into a place in a dream.

The day has passed its twilight. No tourists but one or two specks of seagulls flit about the water line. The tide is low and lazy, sighing in the duskiness. But the sea is not entirely lost to the sky until the ultimate line of horizon.  

In front of him, a shadow flips over from his feet. Like what a distorted mirror might have done to him, it stretches and expands considerably. So that, its legs turn to twin tree trunks; its head to that of a caterpillar. But it is not a ghost, though he has contemplated it for not a small time.

He treads further towards the water, and the shadow, dead and lifeless a moment ago, is at once animated, mimicking his motion idiotically.

His name is Wang Bing. It is the third time he has visited the Surfers Paradise. The first time was some years ago on a trip with his parents, and his then wife and his daughter; this time and the last he came here on the matter of business. Tomorrow he will fly Virgin Blue back to Sydney, where he has lived almost ten years, and where, a girl, with whom he is perhaps in love, is waiting for him.

The thought of her, for the moment, stirs in him a stream of energy, lightening both his spirit and his feet. And still intrigued by the shadow gesturing in his front, he wants to take a photo. There is a Chinese saying, ‘Chase the wind and catch the shadow,’ suggesting the sort of vain efforts in pursuing the nonexistent. But he may still give it a try.

He fumbles in his pocket for his Blackberry, which is an asset of the company he works for. He turned it on; the sudden brightness dazzles him. He presses the camera button, it dims back to darkness. At first glimpse, nothing is visible on the screen. So he waits and blinks, allowing his eyes to adapt to the low illumination. Then, his shadow grows perceptible; and moreover, its background is glittering rich with golden bits, that can’t be detected on the actual field.     

Oh, how marvellous it is!

He presses the button, which triggers the flashlight, disrupting the scene, and surprising him. But in the picture that has been taken, he sees nothing but emptiness. He then knows in dismay that the flash has actually overexposed the weak light and ruined his shadow. He is about to without it try again, when a beep, the sound of arriving SMS, interrupts him.  

It is from her in Sydney. ‘Sorry, you are not the type of man I am looking for, everything should end from here, and good luck to you.’


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发表于 2014-8-3 15:49 来自手机 |显示全部楼层
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晕啊,怎么又倒回去发了?

发表于 2014-8-3 19:32 |显示全部楼层
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Gone 发表于 2014-8-3 14:49
晕啊,怎么又倒回去发了?


这是第二版。。改进版,没事,你不用从头看。。也不会从头再发。。你只看后面的就好了,后面的都是一样的。。其实第一章是最纠结的,我大概都改了10多遍了,目前这一个同后面的行文比较接近。。写东西也是写到后面,自己的声音慢慢比较明确。。
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发表于 2014-8-3 20:10 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2014-8-3 21:33 来自手机 |显示全部楼层
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何木 发表于 2014-8-3 18:32
这是第二版。。改进版,没事,你不用从头看。。也不会从头再发。。你只看后面的就好了,后面的都是一样的 ...

理解。。写作是件辛苦的差事,尤其想写好的作品。。后面有渐入佳境的感觉。。
谢谢解释。。加油。。

发表于 2014-9-4 23:57 |显示全部楼层
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楼主,你怎么牛,居然英文小说写这么棒! 敢问什么专业毕业的?从事英文教育还是新闻记者?
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发表于 2014-9-5 00:03 |显示全部楼层
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看完了,第二章在哪儿?

发表于 2014-9-5 14:57 |显示全部楼层
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cocowhite 发表于 2014-9-4 23:03
看完了,第二章在哪儿?

我是业余的,也不是记者... 第二章要等一下...原来发的是旧版本..
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