希望各位老鸟给些建议，俺的cover letter

曾家大少

没能力，只有出卖体力。看看俺的体力cover letter，各位老鸟给些建议吧，英语也不好，有语法错误，请各位给指点出来。谢谢
现在体力工也不好干啊，随时准备下岗。有过食品厂，清洁，仓库经验。不知道如何添加。


追逐足迹平均工资是俺的梦想。





Dear Sir or Madam,

Application For The Position of_____________.

I am keen to apply for the position of _________ advertised through _________.  Please find my resume enclosed to support my application.


As my attached resume indicates, I have a lot of local work experiences in different industries. I had received training in food handling and personal hygiene. Familiar with the work program of the food industry, have experience in a fast paced, food processing environment, good knowledge strong safety focus and high standards of quality.


In previous positions over i was involved in product quality. Therefore I have strong attention to detail and ability to work to HACCP standards, good time management, be punctual and hard working also have ability to work well in a team.


I believe that I have ability to meet the new challenges your company offers and would welcome the opportunity to discuss at an interview my ability to meet your company’s needs.

Yours Sincerely,

[ 本帖最后由 曾家大少 于 2012-6-2 15:35 编辑 ]

youngf

主要得照着JD上写.

曾家大少

ls的大哥，请明示 jd是什么意思？

mwjfaith

job description

wfire

Job description.
就是说cover letter要根据不同的职位需要写，比如一个职位要求你具备A、B、C 三个条件，你就开门见山，着重写你的经历如何证明你具备这些。
no need to say things like 'I had experience in different industries', try to be specific.

曾家大少

原帖由 wfire 于 2012-6-3 16:11 发表
Job description.
就是说cover letter要根据不同的职位需要写，比如一个职位要求你具备A、B、C 三个条件，你就开门见山，着重写你的经历如何证明你具备这些。
no need to say things like 'I had experience in different industries', try to be specific.

很好的建议。谢谢。