请帮忙改改，这几句英语是不是有很多语病？？谢了，在线等，急！

花儿红彤彤

I am very lucky I can learn more from fantastic staff and I can keep playing with lovely children.I would try my best to bring more fun to children.

bulaohu

I'm very lucky to be able to learn from the fantastic staff here. I enjoy every second I spend with the lovely children and will always do my best to bring as much fun to them as I can.

PACIFIC

Is this for probation?

花儿红彤彤

原帖由 bulaohu 于 2010-4-20 10:41 发表
I'm very lucky to be able to learn from the fantastic staff here. I enjoy every second I spend with the lovely children and will always do my best to bring as much fun to them as I can.

谢谢，我这就照你的改了。

花儿红彤彤

原帖由 PACIFIC 于 2010-4-20 10:43 发表
Is this for probation?

不好意思，什么是probation？
我是到幼儿园实习，写poster介绍自己。放假前已经去过一段时间，放假后我再继续去两周，所以要把以前的poster修改一下，加点话。

amywdr

probation就是试用期

xjyoyo

2#改得挺好的。

zetex

2楼修改得很好，这个只是我的想法，提供参考而已：
I believe that I am very luck during the past weeks to be a part of and learn from the fantastic staff here. I enjoy the wonderful time spent playing with these lovely kids and I want to try and bring more fun and happiness to them.

idoldai

原帖由 zetex 于 2010-5-21 17:53 发表
2楼修改得很好，这个只是我的想法，提供参考而已：
I believe that I am very luck during the past weeks to be a part of and learn from the fantastic staff here. I enjoy the wonderful time spent playing w ...

LS的语法有错误。我还是喜欢2楼的

bluesky

原帖由 zetex 于 2010-5-21 17:53 发表
2楼修改得很好，这个只是我的想法，提供参考而已：
I believe that I am very luck during the past weeks to be a part of and learn from the fantastic staff here. I enjoy the wonderful time spent playing w ...

  i was lucky during the past two weeks.:)

chugao

怎么没人用复数，还是无所谓？