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忏愧，5年纪了，第一次看到小儿子的二篇作文，这水平如何？需要如何提高写作呢？
The night sky was aglow with the moonlight of the crescent moon shining through the shattered window like a silvery claw in the night sky. As the piece of the night sky flew ahead with their squalling breaking the silence of the vast sky I had entered with only the sound of the creaking and rusting of the front door to accompany me.With the smell of moist carpet and wood around me, and with the taste of barbequed cockroaches, I had felt what was around me which was mostly just cracking bricks and shattered glass.
I had always thought of what it was like to stay at a haunted mansion. No one had dared to enter the haunted house so I went in by myself. I had gone in thinking that no one had come out alive so what was the point was for me to go in.I had turned the corner and checked out what had happened. Blood and gore had spilt everywhere. As I backed up I spotted an unknown creature devouring a human that was still alive.
As I stepped back as I hear the crunch of shattered glass pieces. I can hear it moving like a heavy drum. The abomination looked as if it was nearly 3 meters tall, with a tongue that was split like a snake's tongue. It had no eyes and razor sharp blades as hands. It vomited blood out and I was horrified.
It looked as if it was in control of the house. When it stared at me the plants looked at me as well with a raging glow. I ran back and bolted out the door as it stabbed me in the back. I was going to be its next meal.
As I crawled my way to the sunshine it dragged me in.Now I am here stuck in this puny cage still bleeding. Only if I could bash my way out.I rested my arm on the side noticing a lockpick. I was just happy I could get out of the rotting old cage. I managed to open the cage’s door as I stumble outside in hopes to not alert the monster.
I stared out at the window as the moonlight entered the room filling it.I stare blankly at the moon as I spotted something.A knife!I quickly put it into my pocket and hid it in the cage as the abomination came down.It growls at me like a bear as it leaves the room.I used this moment to start cutting the wooden bar.
第二篇
Many major crisises like covid, global warming and extinction have accured.Deforstation is a major crisis that is discussed for being removed or letting it continue.Here are some pros and cons if deforestation should continue.
Primarily, deforestation is the cause to many other major problems like global warming and extinction.Global warming can occur if too many trees are cut down, resulting in carbon to be released into the air.This will cause the icebergs to melt and make the sea level rise for 65-70m high causing floods and flash floods.
Another con about deforestation, is that it can cause extinction.With Australia's fires in 2019, and still letting deforestation continue we are putting the animals at great risks of losing homes or being harmed.
A pro about deforestation is that is can be used to make room for housing, farm land and cities.The wood that is cut down can also be paid for money to donate to important businesses like charities and animal sanctuaries.
Deforestation is a major problem globally and can cause many other major problems.There are also pros about deforstation.What side will you pick?
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