还是学英语吧

hmzha2

tina50 发表于 2020-2-8 15:03
老师会大致给看一眼，挑几个错

请问你是请的私教吗？

tina50

hmzha2 发表于 2020-2-8 15:06
请问你是请的私教吗？

没有啊，TAFE学过

hmzha2

tina50 发表于 2020-2-8 15:08
没有啊，TAFE学过

我一直以为tage教的很浅显易懂的东西。这个课程由名称不？是全国都有的吗

bigcrow

tina50 发表于 2020-2-8 13:18
你的水平应该高于这里，如果不嫌弃就常来这里逛逛

版主说的极是。俺也觉得会是一种教学相长式的提高。

tina50

hmzha2 发表于 2020-2-8 15:09
我一直以为tage教的很浅显易懂的东西。这个课程由名称不？是全国都有的吗 ...

你的水平，如果想学免费课的话，CERTIFICATE III IN ADVANCED ENGLISH FOR FURTHER STUDY,如果摊上一个好老师，还是能学到些东西，老师就是拼人品了。

如果愿意花钱，直接上certificate IV, 不浪费时间一步到位

tina50

The USA has shown off uniforms for its new Space Force.

The USA has unveiled uniforms for its newly created Space Force. (unveiled 替换 shown off, newly created 替换new）

The U.S. military has officially unveiled the uniforms for its newly created Space Force. （U.S. military 替换USA，unveiled前面加入细节officially，

tina50

1. The U.S. Space Force (USSF) was created in December alongside the U.S. Space Command.

2. The U.S. Space Force (USSF) is the space branch of the U.S. Armed Forces.

3. The United States Space Force (USSF) is the space operations branch of the U.S. Armed Forces. It was officially created alongside the U.S. Space Command when President Donald Trump signed the 2020 National Defense Authorization Act in December 2019. （补充了更多信息）


The U.S. Space Force (USSF) 美国太空军. It founded on 20, December, 2019
The U.S. Space Command 美国太空司令部
The U.S. Armed Forces美军 （美国武装部队）
the space operations branch of the U.S. Armed Forces 美军下属的太空作战部队
2020 National Defense Authorization Act 2020年国防授权法案

tina50

1. The uniforms were designed for Space Force personnel. The design has created quite a stir on social media. (quite a stir, 不小的轰动）

2. The special uniforms were designed for Space Force personnel. The design has created quite a stir on social media. (Uniforms 前面加了special)

3. Special uniforms have been designed for Space Force personnel, but they have created quite a stir on social media.
主动语态active voice 改被动语态passive voice；
将两句合并为一句，Coordinating conjunction, but, joins two clauses together.

PICC

     去BTN 看了，很好，有点澳洲口音，还有transcript，听过了可以看看那些没有听懂，

     澳式英语理论上分为broad、general、cultivated,       BROAD ENGLISH是老百姓的口音，CULTIVATED ENGLISH是

     受过高等教育近似英式口音。口音没有严格的划分，上街遇到当地老年人说的慢容易懂，说的快了岁数大了听的跟不上。

tina50

PICC 发表于 2020-2-9 11:26
去BTN 看了，很好，有点澳洲口音，还有transcript，听过了可以看看那些没有听懂，

     澳式英语理论 ...

缺点是只能听和看，而其它与此相关的学习资料只对老师开放，普通人拿不到，不能做系统学习

tina50

网上看到一句话，
It is easy to feel overwhelmed and devastated by the catastrophic scenes emerging from Australia’s vicious bushfires.

也符合现在的武汉灾难
It is easy to feel overwhelmed and devastated by the catastrophic scenes emerging from Wuhan, China vicious novel coronavirus.

tina50

Families across the country are on edge.

unprecedented emergency

和国内目前的情况也吻合，想想前一段澳洲的山火，看看现在的武汉肺炎，唉，唉。。。

tina50

1. It is the regular green, black and brown army camouflage. It is not camouflaged for space.

2. The design is the regular green, black and brown army camouflage. It is not camouflaged for space. (用The design 替换It）

3. However, the design is the usual camouflage green, black and brown and not camouflaged for space.

（用了transitional word: However，usual camouflage替换了regular;
将两个简单句合并为一句，Coordinating conjunction, and, joins two clauses together.)

StanHuang

tina50 发表于 2020-2-8 13:18
你的水平应该高于这里，如果不嫌弃就常来这里逛逛

能和大家交流和分享是我的荣幸

PICC

NETFLIX上有一部Pandemic 的六级连续剧，名字中文翻译是流感来袭，现在看看和中国武汉有相联系之处。