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tina50

I stay awake all through the night, hunting dusk till dawn.
And when it's light, I say goodnight...yawn, yawn,yawn!

整晚我都要保持清醒，打猎从黄昏开始，持续到黎明。
当天亮时，我说晚安，yawn, yawn,yawn!

tina50

全文完，最后一段，边翻译边打哈欠，yawn威力太大了。

bigcrow

tina50 发表于 2016-6-9 16:15
全文完，最后一段，边翻译边打哈欠，yawn威力太大了。

怎么才开头就结束了？
知道这yawn是很具感染力的，但不曾想到它的威力与禽流感不相上下了，也是跨界的。
版长都中招了，俺还能幸免么，yawn~~~~~~~~~~~`ZZZZzzzzz

tina50

童话故事： 长发姑娘
Rapunzel

tina50

Once upon a time there lived a man and his wife in a cottage next to a great garden. The garden has all sorts of wonderful things growing in it,but it belonged to a powerful witch.

The wife would look at the cabbages growing in the witch's garden and think how good it would be to have some. She begged her husband to get one for their dinner,
"The witch would be very angry," he said.

从前在那里住着一个男人和他的妻子，他们的小屋，与一个大花园相邻。花园里长着各种各样奇妙的东西，可是它属于一位法力强大的女巫。

妻子望着女巫花园里长着的卷心菜，心想如果能有一些该多好。她恳请丈夫去弄一棵来做晚餐。
丈夫说“女巫会非常生气的。”

bigcrow

tina50 发表于 2016-6-10 11:33
Once upon a time there lived a man and his wife in a cottage next to a great garden. The garden has  ...

故事一开始就安排女人惹事了

tina50

同感

tina50

Finally, he climbed into the witch's garden. But as soon as he had picked the cabbage, the witch appeared.
"How dare you enter my garden?" She demanded. He explained just how badly his wife wanted to try the cabbage.

"Very well." She said at last, "but you must give me your child in return."
"But we have none," said the man.
"Soon you will," the witch said, "and I will come for it."

最终他爬进女巫的花园。可是刚一摘到卷心菜，女巫就出现了。
“你怎么敢进我的花园？” 她盘问。
他解释说，只是因为他的妻子非常想尝尝卷心菜。

“好吧。” 她终于说，“但是你必须给我你的孩子作为报答。”
“可是我们一个孩子也没有啊，” 男人说。
“很快你们就会有的，” 女巫说，“而且，为此我会上门。”

bigcrow

tina50 发表于 2016-6-10 21:14
Finally, he climbed into the witch's garden. But as soon as he had picked the cabbage, the witch app ...

版主这句漏字了么？
"but you must give me your child return."

tina50

bigcrow 发表于 2016-6-10 22:12
版主这句漏字了么？
"but you must give me your child return."

多谢提醒！漏字了，马上添上。

tina50

A few months later, a beautiful baby girl was born to them, and they forgot completely about the witch and the promise.
One morning,  the witch appeared at the cottage door.
"Give me your daughter," she demanded.

They begged and pleaded but it was no use. The witch took the baby.

几个月后，一位美丽的女婴出生在他们家。他们已经完全忘记了女巫，也忘记了约定。
一天早晨，女巫出现在小屋门口。
“给我你的女儿” 她要求。
他们乞求并恳求，可是没有用，女巫带走了婴儿。

tina50

The witch named the baby Rapunzel. When Rapunzel grew up, the witch built her a high brick tower.
Nobody could get in or out.

Rapunzel had long golden hair, so long and strong that when the witch wanted to see Rapunzel at the top of the tower, she called,"Rapunzel, Rapunzel, let down your hair."
Rapunzel would loosen her hair and let the witch climb up.

女巫给婴儿起了名字叫Rapunzel. 当Rapunzel长大后，女巫给她建了一个高高的砖塔，没有人能够进出塔楼。

Rapunzel长着一头金色的长发，又长又结实，当女巫想要上塔楼来看她时，她喊道 “Rapunzel, Rapunzel, 把你的头发垂下来。”
Rapunzel就会松开头发，让女巫爬上来。

bigcrow

tina50 发表于 2016-6-11 06:12
The witch named the baby Rapunzel. When Rapunzel grew up, the witch built her a high brick tower.
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翻译这个故事更显版长的国文水平了，棒极，强烈支持版长。

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One morning,  witch appeared at the cottage door.
... ... and let the witch claimed up.

tina50

bigcrow 发表于 2016-6-11 12:11
翻译这个故事更显版长的国文水平了，棒极，强烈支持版长。

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